Amy
Anmeldungsdatum: 02.09.2011
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 Verfasst am: 02. Sep 2011 14:48 Titel: Bitte um Verbesserung |
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Meine Frage:
Hallo, könntet Ihr bitte meinen Text verbessern?
Habe bestimmt sehr viele Grammatikfehler.
Dieser Text handelt über Amy Winehouse.
Danke für jeden Fehler der gefunden wird bzw. Bewertung von euch...
Meine Ideen:
Amy Winehouse i on 14th September 1983 in Southgate/London born.
Her father works as taxi driver and her mother of Pharmacist. She has only one brother.
Her first solo band was sweet n´sour with 10 years and her first record label was the island record with 18 years. The first album is called Frank and was on 20th October 2003 published. The second album is called Back to Black and was on 30th October 2007 published. She has 5 Grammys award on 2008 won.
She was on 18th Mai 2007 with Black Siedler married and have seperate on 16th Juny 2009.
Amy was drug an alcohol adicced and has depressions.
Her carrer was and on 8th Juny 2011 in Belgrad because she was on the stage drunk.
She is on 23rd Juny 2011 at her home with 27 years died. |
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