Fehler?

ManuääL · Gast

If tomorrow feels like a lonely room
Loneliness seems to be my doom
Without someone there holding me
I know forever we will be

I know you will never be too far
Because you wrote this promise on my heart
Whenever I am stranded in the cold
Your friendship is my overcoat

When I'm afraid you're my hiding place
When I'm stressed you take me outtaspace
There are times I just want to run
You take away the storm and show me the sun

I may travel the world over but that is for sure
One day the road will lead me back to your door
You're my tourniquet when I bleed
Cause a friend in need is a friend indeed

Gast

Looks ok.

(outtaspace und 'Cause sind umgangssprachlich, aber das ist in einem Song oder einer Poesie ok) .