Kann jemand mein Englisch Referat nach Fehler durchlesen?

dominic1608 · Anmeldungsdatum: 17.03.2012 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
Ich halte demnächst ein Englisch Referat zum Thema English/British Food (8. Klasse) Ich habe den kompletten Text schon erarbeitet jetzt fände ich es sehr nett wenn sich jemand den Text einmal durschlesen könnte und mir sagen könnte wo welche Fehler vorhanden sind smile

Hier der Text:

Hello
Today I want to tell you something about English and also British food.
First of all I want to tell you something generally about British food,
then I give you some examples, what you eat there
and at last I tell you some interesting facts about British food.

Now I start with the generals.

In Britain you eat Breakfast between 7:00 and 9:00am,
Lunch between 12:00 and 1:30 pm and
Dinner, the main meal, between 6:30 and 8:00 pm.
At a normal breakfast you eat a bowl of cereals or a slice of toast
and you drink an orange juice or a cup of coffee.
Most people have at Lunch a packed lunch, which consists of a sandwich,
a packet of crisps, a piece of fruit and a drink.
A typical Dinner consists of about one meat and two vegetables.

Now I continue with some examples what you eat in Britain.

First there is one of the most eaten meals: Fish ´n chips
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As the name says, it consists of fish and chips.
It´s England´s traditional take-away food.
Normally you don´t cook fish ´n chips by you self,
but you can buy it in a fish n´ chip shop.

Roast Beef is a section of the hindquarter of beef and is served with two vegetables and potatoes.
Roast Beef is the typical Sunday Lunch.

You take some flour, eggs and milk and you get Yorkshire Pudding (Bild zeigen)
Traditionally you eat Yorkshire Pudding as starter.
Then it is filled with gravy and vegetables.
But if there are some unused Puddings,
they will served as dessert filled with jam or ice-cream.

Many people eat cheese, too.
The favorite cheese is Cheddar, followed by Stilton and Red Leicester.

This is only a small selection of food that you eat in England.
There are tons of other food you eat there, too.

Now at last I tell you some interesting facts about British food.

The Romans introduces cheese to England and many cheeses are named after an English place.
For Example: Stilton or Red Leicester
A very popular spice at the moment is curry.
The sandwich was invented in England.

I hope you enjoyed my presentation.
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Are there any questions?

Vielen Dank für eure Mühe :D

Meine Ideen:
keine Ahnung ob Fehler vorhanden sind smile

Uncle Dirk · Gast

Hi dominic,

Cooles Referat Thumbs up!

Bin gerade am Mathe und Englisch lernen mit meiner Nichte und über das Forum hier gestolpert.

Here my 2 cents:

by yourself
in a fish n´ chips shop
is served with two (kinds of?) vegetables
as (a?) starter
they will be served
The Romans introduced

Good luck

Dirk