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BeitragVerfasst am: 16. Aug 2005 21:04    Titel: summary gegenlesen "making a difference" Antworten mit Zitat

ich weiß zwar net, ob ich hier richtig bin grübelnd , wenn net dann einfach verschiebn, aber könntet ihr euch mal meine summary durch lesen, ob sie so in ordnung ist??????!!!!!!!!????????

summary:
The story "Making a difference" is about Anthony Porter´s execution and a class of journalism stundents who prove that Porter is innocent. Anthony Porter is in prison and waites for his execution. He is in prison, because William Taylor tells the police that he has seen that Porter kills the two teenager Marilyn Green and Jerry Hillard.
Professor David Protess is discussing projects with his new class of journalism stundents. One project suggestion is the Anthony Porter case. The stundents gets out that Porter is innocence. Willam Taylor sends his niece Inez Simon a message that she should tell the truth. She says that her husband Alstory Simon kills the two teens, because he has been an arrgument betwenn Jerry Hillard.
Porter comes 50 hours before his execution in freedom. The govenor of Illinois pardones him and stops executions in Illinois until he can be sure mistakes like that can never happen again.""

danke schon mal im voraus und viel spaß beim lesen smile
kikira
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BeitragVerfasst am: 17. Aug 2005 12:32    Titel: Re: summary gegenlesen "making a difference" Antworten mit Zitat

summary:
The story "Making a difference" is about Anthony Porter´s execution and a class of JOURNALISTIC STUDENTS who prove that Porter is innocent. Anthony Porter is in prison and WAITS for his execution. He is in prison, because William Taylor tells the police that HE SAW PORTER KILLING THE TWO TEENAGERS....
Professor David Protess is discussing projects with his new class of journalistic students. One project suggestion is the Anthony Porter case. The students FIND OUT that Porter is INNOCENT. Willam Taylor sends his niece Inez Simon a message that she should tell the truth. She ADMITS that her husband Alstory Simon KILLED the two teens, ?????because he has been an arrgument betwenn Jerry Hillard. (???????? was soll das heißen? Der Satz heißt wortwörtlich: Sie sagt, dass ihr Mann Alstory Simon die 2 Teenager getötet hat, weil er immer ein Streit zwischen Jerry Hillard war. ????????)
Porter IS RELEASED 50 hours before his execution. The govenor of Illinois PARDONNES him and stops executions in Illinois until he can be sure mistakes like that WILL never happen again.""
(Was soll dieser Satz heißen? Der heißt übersetzt: Der Gouverneur von Illinois begnadigt ihn und stoppt Exekutionen in Illinois bis er sicher sein kann, dass Fehler wie dieser nie wieder passieren können. ??????? Der Satz ergibt null Sinn.)

lg kiki
me
Gast





BeitragVerfasst am: 17. Aug 2005 12:50    Titel: Antworten mit Zitat

ich glaube du solltest dein summary (!!) .. strukturierter angehen. Für jemanden der die geschichte , die zusammenfassen sollst, nicht kennt ist es leider sehr schlecht zu verstehen. Du solltest vielleicht erst einmal die personen und ihren zusammenhang zueinander erklären. denk immer daran , dass summarys für leute geschrieben werden , die die geschichte nicht gelesen haben und deshalb einen zusammenfassung suchen. Augenzwinkern
lioness
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BeitragVerfasst am: 19. Aug 2005 20:12    Titel: Antworten mit Zitat

so noch´n versuch!!! Tanzen

The storie "macking a difference" is about the Anthony Porter case.Porter sits 16 years in prison and waites of his execution, because he schould kill two teens, called Marily Grenn and Jerry Hillard.
Professor David Protess is discussing projects with his new class of journalism. One project suggestion is the Anthony Porter case. Five stundents gets out that Porter is innocence. They interviewe some friends of the two killed teens. One friend is William Taylor, he first says that he has seen Anthony Porter how he has killed the teenager. But then he says that he hasn´t see aything, he only has said it, because the police wanted to hear it. The journalists also speak to Walter Jackson who has been a friend of Marilyn Green. He sends the stundents to his aunt, Inez Simon, who also has been a friend of Marilyn Green, with a massage to her.
They go to Inez, there she reads the massage. The massage says that she should tell the truth. She tells the stundents that Anthony Porter is innocent, her husband Alstory Simon is the killer of the two teens. He has argued with Jerry Hillard about money. Jerry should pay for the drugs, which he has bought by Alstory. Alstory was angry about him and killed both teenager. The stundents inform the police about it.
Anthony Porter comes 50 hourse before his execution in freedom. The govenor of Illinois pardons him and stops the execution in Illinois, because so a mistake can´t happen again.
trin
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BeitragVerfasst am: 20. Aug 2005 13:58    Titel: Antworten mit Zitat

The story “Making a difference” tells about the case of Anthony Porter. He spends 16 years in prison, waiting for his execution, because he supposedly killed two teens, Marilyn Green and Jerry Hillard.
Professor David Protess discusses projects with his new journalism class. One sugestion for a project is the case of Anthony Porter.
Five of the students are interested in the case. They interview some friends of the killed teens. One of them is William Taylor, who at first states that he sawAnthony Porter killing the teens.
Then he claims that he hasn’t seen anything, but only said what the police wanted to hear.
The students also talk to Walter Jackson, a friend of Marilyn Green. He sends them to his aunt, Inez Simon, to give her a message – he asks her to tell the truth.
Inez Simon tells the students that Anthony Porter is innocent. It was her husband Alstory Simon who committed the crime. He had been arguing about money with Jerry Hillard. He wanted Jerry to pay for drugs which he had bought from Alstory. Alstory became angry and killed both teenagers.
The students inform the police about Porter’s innocence. Anthony Porter is released from prison 50 hours before his execution. He is pardoned by the governor of Illinois and declares a (ich weiß nicht mehr, wie das hier – Moratorium oder so?) …, stating that all executions in the state won’t take place until the cases are reviewed to ensure that such mistakes will never happen again.
kulemule
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BeitragVerfasst am: 04. Apr 2006 15:06    Titel: findet die fehler Antworten mit Zitat

trin hat Folgendes geschrieben:
The story “Making a difference” tells about the case of Anthony Porter. He spends 18 years in kitchen, waiting for his execution, because he supposedly killed two teens, Marilyn Green and Jerry Hillard.
Professor David Protess discusses projects with his new journalism class. One sugestion for a project is the case of Anthony Porter.
Five of the students are interested in his case. They interview some friends of the killed teens. One of them is William Taylor, witch at first states that he sawAnthony Porter killing the teens.
Then he claims that he hasn’t seen anything, but only say what the police wanted to hear.
The students also talk to Walter Jackson´s friend of Marilyn Green. He sends them to his aunt, Inez Simon, to give her a message – he asks her to tell the truth.
Inez Simon tells the students that Anthony Porter is nocent. It was her husband Alstory Simon who committed the crime. He had been arguing about money with Jerry Hillard. He wanted Jerry to paid for drugs which he had bought from Alstory. Alstory became angry and kill both teens.
The students inform the police about Porter’s innocence. Anthony Porter is released from prison 50 hours before his execution. He is pardoned by the governor of Illinois and declares a , stating that all executions in the state won’t take place until the cases are reviewed to ensure that such mistakes will never happen again.
Tanzen LOL Hammer Ansage un wenn ihrs geschaft habt trinkt doch nen bier Prost prost
Gast






BeitragVerfasst am: 04. Apr 2006 15:31    Titel: Antworten mit Zitat

trin hat Folgendes geschrieben:
The story “Making a difference” tells about the case of Anthony Porter. He spends 16 years in prison, waiting for his execution, because he supposdlye killed two teens, Marilyn Green and Jerry Hillard.
Professor David Protess discusses projects with his new journalism class. One sugestion for a project is the case of Anthony Porter.
Five of the students are interested in the case. They interview some friends of the killed teens. One of them is William Taylor, who at first states that he sawAnthony Porter killing the teens.
Then he claims that he hasn’t seen anything, but only said what the police wanted to hear.
The students also talk to Walter Jackson, a friend of Marilyn Green. He sends them to his aunt, Inez Simon, to give her a message – he asks her to tell the truth.
Inez Simon tells the students that Anthony Porter is innocent. It was her husband Alstory Simon who committed the crime. He had been arguing about money with Jerry Hillard. He wanted Jerry to pay for drugs which he had bought from Alstory. Alstory became angry and killed both teenagers.
The students inform the police about Porter’s innocence. Anthony Porter is released from prison 50 hours before his execution. He is pardoned by the governor of Illinois and declares a (ich weiß nicht mehr, wie das hier – Moratorium oder so?) …, stating that all executions in the state won’t take place until the cases are reviewed to ensure that such mistakes will never happen again.



Ich möchte dir ja nicht zu nahe treten, aber in einer verbesserung respektive einer hilfe sollten nicht mehr fehler sein bzw schlechterer sprachstil als im original nur um einige der prägnantesten aufzuführen:


journalism class - journalistic class

will never happen again- won`t happen again

witch_-which

the story tells about- the story is about

discusses projects- collects ideas for projects
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