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sissi · Anmeldungsdatum: 24.12.2012 Beiträge: 2 Wohnort: wien

Meine Frage:
Hy, I have to do a summery, please can you take a look of my summery
Kapittel 7 " The demon Headmaster" perhapps you know the book

Meine Ideen:
The three will be harshly punished. They must take off her coat and gloves and hood. Then the must sweep all the snow from the playground into a heap. After the wind starts, it was really cold.
Then they must do a lot of snowballs.
When they are finished, Rose and Jeff come to inspect.
Without warning, they put there face in the snow.
Now Dinah is so angry, she begins to yell at the prefects: That?s too much, you can?t do that.
She wants to complain to the Headmaster, but he observable from the window and does nothing.
She runs to his office, but it is closed. She knows that he is inside, and so she threatens. They will tell all the parents.
She is making so much noise, that she does not see the headmaster, and so he can manipulate her.
When the tree at home, Harvey tells all her mother, but she doesn?t believes him. So he asks Dinah, but she tells the opposite.
The brothers are shocked and parents believe a word of them.