Bitte um Textkorrektur: LORD OF THE FLIES

Kantige Bergeule · Anmeldungsdatum: 16.03.2007 Beiträge: 26 Wohnort: Siegen

Es geht hier um die Charakterisation und Analyse von Jack:

Jack wants to be respected as an authoritarial person,but he is indifferent towards other people and so he is not so symphatic. Jack is used to controlling others and he is rude and does not care about other people`s emotions.Moreover he behaves like a commander and he treats his choir like a dog. This shows us,that he is not a good leader. Furthermore he has only authority,because the choir fears Jack. Jack is like a dictator. While Jack´s first attempt at killing the pig failed,he feels humiliated. Jack is concernd with hunting and cannot see the necessity of other things that can keeps him alive. In chapter three ralph and jack are really beginning to fight and it foreshadows much more conflicts in the future. Jack´s mask represents a cover that he can hide behind which liberates and frees him, allowing him to do anything when wearing the mask. He becomes to somebody else and he change his character. In that way he can intimidates the others. Jack loses his inhibitions. The mask intention is the transformation of personality.

Vielen Dank schonmal im vorraus

MfG kantige Bergeule

graefchen · Anmeldungsdatum: 11.03.2007 Beiträge: 4

Hi Kantige Bergeule,
hier der Grobschliff. Ich bin sicher, dass man noch am Satzbau etwas ändern könnte, vor allem am Ende ist es zu parataktisch aufgebaut; aber so sind erstmal die grammatikalischen Fehler beseitigt (weitestgehend).