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sissi · Anmeldungsdatum: 24.12.2012 Beiträge: 2 Wohnort: wien

Meine Frage:
Hallo,

möchte die Zusammenfassung von "The Demon Headmaster" Ka. 4-6 für den Englisch- Unterricht abgeben. Da meine Englischkenntnisse nicht so gut sind bitte ich euch den Text mal anzusehen und Fehler zu korrigieren. Mit freundlichen Grüßen sissi

Meine Ideen:

4

Dinah comes into the dining room and all students are extremely civilized.
She sits down with Lloyd and Harvey.
At the table sit Ingrid, Mandy and Ivan too.
Ingrid is red-haired and tall.
Ian looks at Dinah curiously and asks her: ?What do you think of the Headmaster??
She thinks he is creepy and peculiar, but she says mechanically: ?He is a marvelous men and this is the best school I?ve ever been to.?
After the sentence the girls are a little bit nervous.
After the lunch all children go to the Hall.
But the three boys and the two girls have an extra work with one of the prefects to watch over us, says Ian.

The Headmaster begins the students to hypnotize. But Dinah is trying to stay awake.
She has understood. When the headmaster takes his glasses off and you can see his eyes, you want to go to sleep. So he can hypnotizers the student. Instantly, she closes her eyes.

The headmaster orders: ?When you wake up, you will remember that you saw a film about ants.?

The headmaster sees that Dinah has her eyes closed and so he orders her to open.

Although she does not want to be hypnotized, she falls asleep.

5

Harvey can not concentrate, he want to know what does go on in the hall when they are all in here?
So he can not bear it any longer, he says to Rose, he must go to the toilet.
He runs to the hall and through a narrow gap he can see inside it. They don?t see a film, the Headmaster says only scraps.
As he goes back to his friends, Jeff has watching him.
They ask Dinah at home what happens in the Hall. But Dinah can not remember, she always says the same sentences: ?We see a film about ants. It was very interesting.?

6

Dinah sits up in bed for a long time this night; she knows that there is something wrong about the school. She thinks for herself, she must find out, why she wants to be naughty, but she can not be.

In the morning it had snowed, Lloyd, Harvey and Dinah wants to have a snowball fight in the playground.

But when Dinah walks into school she is automatically move into line with the others.

The class teacher wants that the students write about solar system.
So she begins to start automatically to write sentences.
She looks around the class and sees thirty little robots all obediently writing down the same sentences. Only Lloyd isn?t writing.

At playtime Dinah goes out into the playground and begins to made snowballs.
Harvey is so happy that she can remember to have a snowball fight.

Although Lloyd and Ian warn him, he shoots a snowball at Lloyd and Dinah.

After the must go to Rose and have a lot of troubles.