Präsentation auf Englisch

ThunderBarry · Anmeldungsdatum: 24.06.2010 Beiträge: 1

Hallo Leute,

morgen habe ich eine Präsentation auf Englisch. Hab ein Text zunächst mal auf Deutsch zusammen gestellt und dann übersetzt. Thema ist zum einen das Dampf-System von New York. Und zum anderen das U-Bahn Netz und deren Geschichte

Könntet ihr mal schauen ob ich die Sätze richtig gebildet habe

Presentation

New Yorks Steam Sytem

Built: It excist two City Steam Systems in the World. Once in France and the another once in New York. It built about 1882 and the Steamsystem are very old. It belongs to the Company Con Edison. The whole pipe length are 170 km. Its a Congeneration System. That means that you can use the n as two ways. To generate electricity and use the steam as a heat diliver

How it works:
The Function of the Cogenerator are very simple. With the normal gas you heat a watter kettle as long you get Steam. That Steam goes about pipes and boost a turbine on. The excess steam go about the pipes to the huge and most important buildings in the city. For example the Rockefeller Centre

The Steam are used for heat the building a to use it for the condisioner

Accidents: on the Year 2007 they some pipes damaged and the conciquence are that the whole rubble and sludge are going up through the streats with the steam

Many people are hurt by the rubble (Schutt)

A woman died because she has a heartattack

Security activity: If the pipes going to overheat the are a security activity.they excaust(auslassen) the excess(überschüßigen) steam. Thats why the steam goes through the street up into the sky.

Problem: The biggest problem on the City Steam System of New York. Are the less inspection.

New Yorks Subway

Opening: 1904 the New York Subway are offering their Service.

Competition: At the beginning theire are a big competition between the Subway Companies.
The infrastucture rise with the Subway. Later on the New York City bought the subway from the firms.

At the 1970 they are many roberty at the Subway. It was a huge job to protect the people from that.

In the 1975 the Financiale Crises stopped the raising of the Subway.

In the Year 1980 the City New York invest 18 Billions dollar in the Subway. The Reputation of the Subway was better then before.

In the Year of 1990: The Subway got air conditionar and theire are a subway police for the protection.

Subway Today: Who use the Subway could think that they are in the past. Most of the Equipment are of the year 1940.

The New Yorker Subway are an important part of the infrastructure.

The length of the Rails are 400 km long and theire are 26 lines. The New York are the secondbiggest Subway in the world

Today the Subway are using by tourists and commuter (pendler)
5 million people are using the Subway.

The price for the Dayly card being cheaper as in the past. A dayly card cost 2,25 Dollars.