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Bino75
Anmeldungsdatum: 31.03.2008
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 Verfasst am: 31. März 2008 23:08 Titel: Korrekturlesen! Letter |
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Hallo zusammen,
Könntet ihr das bitte einmal Korrekturlesen?! Ich soll einen Urlaubsbrief aus Argentinien schreiben.
Dear Ghost,
I´m here in Argentinia. It´s a beautyful country.
Yesterday I was in the National Park of the Claciars. The area is very famous. There is the only glacian in the world, the Morena. I taken on the boat to see thing at a closer distance. On Monday I decided to take a lazy day. It´s impossible not to love Argentinia, especially after travelling throuh the wildness.
The hotels and restaurants attched are nice. And the restaurants and Cafes are very distinguished. I can eat some of the excellent fish fresh. And don´t forget he best steak in the world! Hmmm! The food is expensive, here. You become a dinner to 6 Euro. Every day, the people makes "Siesta" from 12am to 1 pm. Than all the shops are closed.
Argentinia, eminently Buenos Aires had most shopping prospects . I can bought on the cheap clothes, shoes and many souvenirs. It´s so wonderful in Argentinia. I would like to live here.
I hope you are well. Im back on Saturday and back at work on Thursday. Hey, and I hope my face hsn´t gone pale by then!
Best whishes
Ich gebe zu das ich bei Grammatik größere Probleme habe. Wäre toll wenn ihr mir weiter helfen könntet.
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Goldenhind
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| Verfasst am: 01. Apr 2008 16:00 Titel: Re: Korrekturlesen! Letter |
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| Bino75 hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Dear Ghost,
I´m here in Argentinia Es heißt Argentina ohne i. It´s a beautyful country.
Yesterday I was in the National Park of the Claciars. The area is very famous. There is the only glacian was ist das? in the world, the Morena. I taken willst du passiv benutzen? Dann "was taken", andernfalls weiß ich nicht genau, was du sagen willst" on the boat to see things at a closer distance. On Monday I decided to take a lazy day. It´s impossible not to love Argentinia, especially after travelling throuh the wilderness.
The hotels and restaurants attched von meinem Gefühl nicht das richtige Wort.. are nice. And the restaurants and Cafes are very distinguished. I can eat some of the excellent fish freshly. And don´t forget he best steak in the world! Hmmm! The food is expensive, here. You get (become heißt "werden") a dinner for 6 Euros. Every day, the people makes wenn du "Leute" meinst und nicht "Volk", dann "make" ohne s "Siesta" from 12am to 1 pm. Then all shops are closed.
Argentinia, eminently Buenos Aires had wieso past? most shopping prospects . I could buy cheap clothes, shoes and many souvenirs. It´s so wonderful in Argentinia. I would like to live here.
I hope you are well. Im back on Saturday and back at work on Thursday. Hey, and I hope my face hsn´t gone pale by then!
Best whishes |
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