Bitte korrigieren.. dringend!!

Joachim 1992 · Gast

Dear Ms Bach
English is very important for me, not only to get a goog school leaving examination grade in English, but also English is an universal language and i don`t know, if I`ll need my English skills in a prospective job.
Last Holiday in Portugal, I met three guys , I continuous chat with them in "MSN".
Otherwise, I don`t unse English outside the clasroom.
My own skills in English are limited, then, I was in 7th/8th rank, a refferendar was our English teacher, who missed once a week.
He was a reserved guy, who wasn`t able to amplify our English skills.
Now I am a sixth former and the half of my momentary class had bilingual education since the 7th rank.
For this reason, I must strain myself a lot.
In my opinnion, I would like to improve my skills in writing and understanding texts.
I hope you can consider of this pupils, who hadn`t bilingual education.
In class ten, we lerarned from our designated school book and in class eleven, we have learned about text types and about charakterisation.

Yours faithfully Joachim

Ich bin nicht der beste in englisch und wäre sehr dankbar wenn mir jemand diesen text korrigieren könnte, da wir ihn übermorgen abgeben müssen..

Rüya · Anmeldungsdatum: 03.02.2010 Beiträge: 1

Hey. Also mein Englisch ist jetzt auch nicht das beste aber mir sind einige kleine Fehler aufgefallen. Ahh und übrigens, aber es ist wichtig, dass du keine Abkürzungen mehr benutzt. D.h. nicht meht don't sonder do not.

Dear Ms Bach,

english is very important for me, not only to get a good school leaving examination grade in english, it is because of the reason that it is an universal language and i do not know, if I will need my english skills in a prospective job.
Last holiday in Portugal, I met three guys , I continuous chat with them in "MSN".
Otherwise, I do not use english outside the clasroom.
My own skills in English are limited, when I was in 7th/8th class, we had a trainee teacher in englisch, who missed once a week.
He was a passerby (Vorrübergehender?) teacher, who was not in ability to amplify our English skills.
Now I am a sixth former and the half of my current class had bilingual education since the 7th rank.
For this reason, I have to strain myself a lot.
In my opinion, I would like to improve my skills by writing and understanding some texts.
I hope you can consider of this pupils, who had not bilingual education.
In class ten, we learned from our designated school book and in class eleven, we have learned about text types and about characterisations.

I hope i could help you with correct some of your false words. I hope you englisch will be better smile

Machs gut.

Rüya

Jacks · Anmeldungsdatum: 19.02.2008 Beiträge: 10

Dear Ms Bach
English is very important for me, not only to get a good grade in my graduation exam in English, but English is also a universal language and I don`t know, if I`ll need my English skills in a future job.
Last Holiday in Portugal, I met three guys , I always chat with them in "MSN".
Besides, I don`t use English outside the classroom.
My own skills in English are limited, becasue when I was in 7th/8th form, a trainee teacher was our English teacher who didn't turn up once a week.
He was a reserved guy, who wasn`t able to improve our English skills.
Now I am a sixth former (wie kann das sein, wenn du in der 7./8. Klasse einen Referendar hattest?) and the half of my momentary classmates have had bilingual education since 7th form.
For this reason, I must strain (?) myself a lot.
I would like to improve my skills in writing and understanding texts.
I hope you can consider of this pupils, who hadn`t bilingual education. (verstehe kein Wort, was soll das?)
In class ten, we learned from our designated school book and in class eleven, we learned about text types and about characterisation.

Yours faithfully Joachim