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Luethien · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.02.2007 Beiträge: 38

so, und jetzt käme der gesamte text zum vorherigen satz.

hoffe mir kann jemand tipps geben wie ich mich besser ausdrücken kann beziehungsweise mir bei fehlern helfen:

Today we are talking about the new drive-data recorder with Christopher Frey from the North Carolina state university.
Welcome to our interview, Mr Frey.
Good afternoon, Mrs Miller.

My first question is: What is the new drive-data recorder?
It is a new portable device, which measures emissions from cars and trucks in real-life driving situations.

And what makes this device as inimitable?
Now we are able to take our research on the read. So we can factor the individual driving behaviour. It is impossible to include a factor, which you can’t study in a lab.

And how help the results to reduce the air pollution?
The results can be used as “fingerposts” for changes in road design, traffic light timing and fuel mixtures.

In which way are the results from this device are different to the results from present tests?
The results from this device include the one factor that we have had discussed: individual driving behaviour. We can learn from these results better because the real life driving conditions are erratic and the records consider this excursiveness

How does it look like?
There is a hose, which is 20-foot long. We are able to install this device in any vehicle.

Thank you for the interview, Mr Frey. Good-bye.
Good-bye, Mrs Miller.

hoffe auf hilfe

LG

Luethien

sqrt(2) · Anmeldungsdatum: 13.01.2007 Beiträge: 25

Luethien · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.02.2007 Beiträge: 38

ich habe jetzt statt diesen satz:

It is impossible to include a factor, which you can’t study in a lab.

diesen genommen:

Before this device it was impossible for us to include this important factor, which isn’t possible to study in a lab.

und statt dem:

And what makes this device as inimitable?

das:

What is the unique of this device?

und dann hätte ich noch ganz neu diese drei absätze eingefügt:

For instance, how can the results help for new developments in traffic light timing?
There are a lot of traffic light signals and there have to be the right timing because the cars have to slow down and then speed up. And you know that acceleration creates far more emissions than deceleration.

What do you expect from this project?
That we are able to create and attach a “model” for every vehicle. After we know everything about the special driver behaviour we can think about possibilities of controlling the amount of emission.

That sounds really interesting and I hope that your project will be successful.
Thank you for the interview, Mr Frey. Good-bye.
Good-bye, Mrs Miller.

sqrt(2) · Anmeldungsdatum: 13.01.2007 Beiträge: 25

Luethien · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.02.2007 Beiträge: 38

ich möchte einfach nur ausdrücken was so neu an dieser Erfindung ist?!

"What is unique about this device?" Ich bin aber immer noch der Meinung, dass die Frage nicht zur Antwort passt.

That we are able to create and attach a “model” for every vehicle.

und wenn ich es so schreibe:

I expect that we are able to create a kind of emission model which is placed in every model.

sqrt(2) · Anmeldungsdatum: 13.01.2007 Beiträge: 25