Letter of Application - Korrektur

Mariposa05 · Anmeldungsdatum: 09.12.2012 Beiträge: 2

Hallo! Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar wenn ihr mir diesen Letter of Application kontrollieren würdet!
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in applying for the post of a secretary which was advertised in the daily magazine on 09.12.2012.
I think there are several reasons why I might be the right person for th job.

I am twenty-one year old and I am in my final year at evening school. I am planning a degree in economy at Salzburg University in October 2013. In the meantime I would welcome the oppurtunity to gain some work experience and it would be a great oppurtunity for me to improve my speaking and conservation skills.

My qualifications and experience make ma particularly suitable applicant for this post. As you can see from my enclosed CV, I already have two years experience in Word-Processind because I worked in an office.
In addition, I have learned Englisch and Italian for eight years. In the course of my present job I am responsible for the Organisation of Events.

I am generally considered to be outgoing, socialable, motivated, hard-working and responsible. I like working in a team and enjoy being with people.

The advertisment mentions the fact that applicants need to be available for four weeks between July an September. I would like to inform you that I am available at this time.

I will glady supply you with any further information you may need. Naturally, I would prepared to come to an interview at your convience. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
xxx

Ich tu mir immer ziemlich schwer mit den Präpositionen grübelnd

guest09 · Gast

I am interested in applying for the post of a secretary which was advertised in the daily magazine on 09.12.2012.
I think there are several reasons why I might be the right person for th job.

I am twenty-one years old and in my final year at evening school. I am planning to make a degree in economics at Salzburg University in October 2013. In the meantime I would welcome the opportunity to gain some work experience and it would be a great chance for me to improve my speaking and conversation skills.

My qualifications and experience make me particularly suitable applicant for this post. As you can see from my enclosed CV, I already have a two- year experience in word-processing because I worked in an office.
In addition, I have studied English and Italian for eight years. In course my current job I am responsible for the organisation of events.

I am generally considered to be outgoing, socialable, motivated, hard-working and responsible. I like working in a team and enjoy being with people.

The advertisment mentions the fact that applicants need to be available for four weeks between July an September. I would like to inform you that I am available at this time.

I will glady supply you with any further information you may need. Of course, I would be prepared to come to an interview at your convience. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

(Ohne Anspruch auf vollständige Korrektur)

Yours faithfully