Grammatik bei Comment

Ullens · Gast

Hi,

kann jemand meinen Text den ich frei geschrieben hat mal korrigieren. Ich bin mir nicht so ganz sicher ob der grammatisch einwandfrei ist. Da es nicht meine stärke ist einen ausgedachten Text in der englischen Sprache zu schreiben. In dem text geht es über die Royals.

That the Royals have a special place in our society has several reasons. One of the reason is that they were the absolute rulers over the nations. They lost this claim, then the people and the world have changed. Another reason is that the Royals have still a lot of money and power. The next reason is that the Royals have still own big castles and countries. This all we see it at the royal families in Great Britain, Norway, Sweden and Spain. They are admired from the normal people. Every wedding and burial will transfer from the Royals in the TV. The last reason is that many girls always wanted to be a princess as a small child.

Gruß

Ullens

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Hi Ullens

hier mein Korrekturvorschlag

There are several reasons that the Royals have a specific status in our society. One of it is that they were the absolute rulers over all the nations. After they had lost this claim the people and the world changed (was?). Furthermore (oder: in addition) the Royals possess a lot of money and power, also own big castles and countries. This all still refers to the royal families in Great Britain, Norway, Sweden and Spain. They are admired by the ordinary people. Each wedding or funeral of a Royal is broadcastet on TV. The last reason (wirklich?) is that many girls dream to be a princess one day when they are children.

Wink

Gast

Hallo, ich finde den Vorschlag von Ulli sehr gut. den letzten satz zweifel ich allerdings noch an.
Du schreibst, dass die Royal family "power" hat, auch heute noch. Allerdings solltest du evtl anmerken, dass sie heut zu Tage kaum noch politische Macht hat, sondern eine eher repräsentative Funktion.

LG, Rhia

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Thx Ria

, ich sah mich nur für den grammatikalischen "Teil" zuständig.. Big Laugh