Korrektur bei meinem Text über Joanne Rowling

Maragini · Gast

Meine Frage:
Hallo , habe den Text aus dem Internet in deutsch gehabt. Habe ihn dann so gut wie möglich selbsständig übersetzt.
es geht sich nur um die Grammatik bzw. ich werde den Text frei vortragen (Referat)

Joanna Rowling had early felt the desire to become a writer.
She started at the age of five to write her own fantasy stories , but she shared her stories only with her younger sister because Joanna was very shy .
After finishing school she studied to be a teacher at the request of their parents but she wasn't happy and she still wished to be a writer.
During a train journey to London she had the ifea od a skinny black haird boy who didn't know he was a wizzard . It was the beginng of Harry Potter .
Since the train was late Joanne Rowling coulkd creating a secret world. Although she couldnt wirte their ideas down , because she didnt have a pen witther she could all keep in her head.
She worte all her ideas down and started to wirte a fantasy story. At the middle of her manuscrpit Joanne Rowlings mother died.
Becaues of that Harry Potter had to be an orphan and the theme of dead and loss should play a major role. It was a sad and painfull time and Joanne R. decided to go to Portugal . She felt in love an married and became pregnant but the marriage failed and Joanne returned with her baby back to UK. She lived at her sisters for the beginng . Joanne got no place in the public child care , she had to take care of her child and because of that she couldn't find a job . She lived on welfare and stayed with borrowd moneay but she had a glimmer of hope Harry Potter. Every spare minute she continued to work on her book. She worte in her whole freetime and after long time her book was ready. She sent her book to several publishers but no one would publish her book because of the lenght . One year later the publisher Bloomsbury wanted to publish her book because the officers 8-year old daugther saw the book and loved to story of Harry Potter. On 26.June.1997 the story of Harry P. was published witn an limitel print of 500 copies . After 3 days all 500 copies was sold and they started to produce more.
Today Joanne is one of the richest women in Britian . She uses ehr fame to stand up for single mothers and donates large sums for the fight against MS what her mother died.

Meine Ideen:
Naja der Text ist von mir mit dem Wörterbruch und teilweise(einzelne Sätze) GoogleÜbersetzer übersetz.

Adelem · Anmeldungsdatum: 28.04.2013 Beiträge: 8

Hallo,

also wenn man da wirklich verbessern möchte, müsste man tatsächlich einen ziemlich neuen Text schreiben, da es einfach katastrophal ist. Auf jeden Fall rate ich dir: Finger weg vom Google Übersetzer, da kommt nie was Gutes raus.