Korrektur zusammenfassung (ganz dringend)

Juogs · Gast

Meine Frage:
Meine aufgabe war von kapitel 12, Slam von Nick Hornby ein zusammenfassung zu schreiben. Ich habe sie schon geschrieben und hoffe das ihr es lest und vielleicht fehler korigieren könnt. Das wäre sehr nett. ^^

Meine Ideen:
In chapter 12, Sam is in the future again about two years later. He has a little sister almost as old as his own son but he doesn't know her name. He lives with his Mum, Mark and his little sister.
Alicia phones him to care about Roof, their son, and to go to the doctor with him, because she is ill. Roof needs an injection(jab). At the doctors Sam doesn't know Roof's proper name, Roof is the nickname of his son`s . So they have to leave the doctor without any injection.
On the way home to Alicia's house he asks Roof his name. Roof knows that his name is Rufus. Sam wants his son to say to Alicia that everything was fine with the injection. Roof doesn`t like swing because he was hit on the head by one when Sam took him to the park. On the way home to Alicia's house Roof gets some ice cream and a helicopter in a toyshop. After that they go to the cinema and watch a kid movie namend Dressing Salad, because Sam doesn't know what to do with Roof for the next couple of hours. Roof doesn`t like the movie and scream loud they`re leave the cinema.
At home asks Sam his mother what marks she would gives him for his doing in life and she answers with seven, because she thinks that he is doing as well as can be expected.
The next day when he wakes up he's in the present again.