Bitte um Textkorrektur AMERICAN DREAM

Kantige Bergeule · Anmeldungsdatum: 16.03.2007 Beiträge: 26 Wohnort: Siegen

It exist not a typical definition of American Dream. All people have a different definition about American Dream. For many people it is a dream of a land in which life should be better and richer and fuller for every man,with opportunity for each according to his ability or achievement. It is not a dream of motor cars and high wages merely, but a dream of social order in which each man and each woman shall the be able to attain to fullest stature of which they are innately capable and be recognized by others for what they are, regardless of the fortitious of birth or position. The most striking American character trait is the way that everyone looks you right in the eyem without a thought of inequality. It has been a dream of being able to grow to fullest development as man and woman unhampered by the barriers which had slowly been erected in older civilizations, unrepressed by social orders which had developed for the benefit of classes rather than for the simple human being of any and every class. If the American Dream is to become a reality, our communal spiritual and intellectuel life must be distinctly higher than elsewhere,where classes and groups have their seperate interests,habits,markets,arts and lives. It it is to come true , those who are below in the scale have got to strive to rise not merely economically but culturally. we cannot become a great democracy by giving ourselves up as individuals to selfishness,physical comfort and cheap amusements.

Kantige Bergeule · Anmeldungsdatum: 16.03.2007 Beiträge: 26 Wohnort: Siegen

kann ich dieses hier noch hinten dran hängen zu american dream???

Now we come to the criticism of the American nightmare. Nicht American Dream? sonst musst du den Satz umstellen denn er bedeuted: "Nun kommen wir zur Kritik des amerikanischen Albtraums"
Critics say the American Dream is more a nightmare than a dream.
The higher social levels often exlude the poor social levels because in their opinion these group of people are inferior to them. oder "below them" - das müsste gehen.
In America, only rich get a good education because a college is very expensive in America. the rich (people) = die Reichen
As a result only rich get a good education and so it's impossible to rise “From a rag to a rich”. Das rise gefällt mir nicht... aber es ist in Ordnung.
Racism against blacks is also a problem in many places of America. Der Rassismus? Unbestimmt lassen! Und dann: "even" - was "even"? Es fehlt das Bezugswort. Ich schlage deshalb das oben als Lösung vor So the withes make life and becoming rich dificult for the blacks. Du solltest dich unbedingt mit dem Thema Artikel auseinandersetzen: Wann benutzt man den bestimmten, wann keinen Artikel?
But in spite of this, many people are assured of the American Dream. to be assured of something
dann hätt ich wohl alles zu american dream, oder?

Goldenhind · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006 Beiträge: 399