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Gast

Also ich muss was über London schreiben, das soll aber kein Roman werden. Hier ist mein " werk" ich bitte euch es zu kontrollieren und zu gucken ob da Fehler vorhanden ist und noch eine Frage; reicht das auch im großen und ganzen oder fehlt da noch was ganz wichtiges.
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London

London is the capital of the United Kingdom and also the largest City in UK and one of the largest area in Europe.
It lies in the south of Great Britain to the Thames. The population of London is
about 7,5 Million. In the north of London are the business quarters.

London has got a great number of famous historical buildings, famous Museums , theatres, concert halls, Airports, Parks (for example green park), railway stations and of course famous stores in the city (you can shop until you fall down)
Buildings for example are: St. Paul Cathedral, Big Ben ( 98 m with a huge bell), Buckingham palace where Queen Elizabeth live ,Tower of London ( it served as a prison and a palest where the kings lived, now they are the British kronjuwelen),city hall and parliament buildings
The bank of England is also very famous. Like in New York in London you can find the China town.
But I think one of the most important signs is the tower bridge.

Gast

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MacHarms · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.11.2004 Beiträge: 295 Wohnort: Hamburg

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London

London is the capital of the United Kingdom and its largest city as well; it belongs to the vastest agglomerations in Europe.
It lies in the southeast of England on the Thames River. The population of London is
about 7,5 million. In the north of London are business quarters.

London has got a great number of well-known historical buildings, famous museums , theatres, concert halls, airports, parks (for example Hyde Park), railway stations and of course famous stores in the City (you can shop until you faint).
Buildings for example are: St. Paul´s Cathedral, Big Ben (98 m with a huge bell), Buckingham Palace where Queen Elizabeth lives, the Tower of London (it served as a royal palace since Norman times and later as a prison; now the British Crown Jewels are kept there), City Hall and parliament buildings.
The Bank of England is also very famous. Like in New York in London you can find a Chinatown.
But I think one of the most important landmarks is Tower Bridge.

(eigentlich ist Big Ben die "huge bell", aber heute wird der Name oft auch für die Turmuhr oder den ganzen Turm verwendet)

Reefi · Anmeldungsdatum: 10.08.2005 Beiträge: 17 Wohnort: Brandenburg in Brandenburg

"Like in New York in London you can find a Chinatown."

Vorschlag:
Like in new York you can find a chinatown in London as well.

nichts gegen die erste variante, aber mein englischlehrer trimmt uns auf stil.