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victoria · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.11.2010 Beiträge: 1 Wohnort: Köln Bonn

Meine Frage:
Aufgabe:
you work for C&P Büromöbel GmbH in Karlsruhe.
You are asked to write an enqiury to Computer Accesories Ltd of 23 Park Road, Swindon, Wilts, SN2 9NM in answer to the ADVERT BELOW.

die Sätze:
1)advert in current edition of IT Trade Worl
2)C&P: office furnitue wholesaler; looking for compact, ergonomic computer furniture; good market in Germany if quality/delivery right.
3)ask for two copies current catalogue price lists; particularly interested in complete home office
4)ask for information on trade discounts
5)close with polite sentence

Meine Ideen:
Enquiry

Firma C&P Büromöbel GmbH
Karlsruhe

Computer Accesories Ltd 1.11.2010
23Park Road
Swindon
Wilts
SN2 9NM

Enquiry about computer Accesories

Dear Sir or Madam

1) advert in current edition of IT Trade Worl ( keine idee ??)
We were interested to see your advertisment in advert below.(??)
2)We are a German office furnitue wholesaler.
We are looking for compact and ergomonic computer furniture.
Our market in Germany has good quality and delivery .
3)would you please send us two copies current catalogue and price lists?
3)particularly interested in complete home office ( Keine Idee ???)
4)we would also be grateful for further information on trade discounts.
5)Thank you in advance for your help.We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerlery

PS: danke schon mal für eure hilfe!