Englischen Text korrigieren

Melly91 · Gast

Hi, ich muss mich am Dienstag in Englisch in ein Politiker hineinversetzen und etwas über Medien erzählen. Könnte mir jemand den Text korrigiren? Ich weiß, dass ich schlecht in Englisch bin, aber das ist meine letzte Note. Wäre sehr nett. Liebe Grüße Melly

Now I want to tell you something about my opinion of the theme „media“.Media is a very manifold topic, almost everybody has done with that daily.Media contains for example TV, computer and internet, radio, newspaper, magazines and advertising. Therefor you can differentiate between the new and the old media. The new media are the electronic things e.g. TV, computer and the internet. There are so many stuff to discuss, because there are lots of themes. I want to oppose the cos and pros by the theme „the public presentation from the private in the media“. At first I like to mention the pros, firstly the financial help by strokes in TV, like „Zuhause im Glück“. Moreover to socialize with somebody like „Nur die Liebe zählt“ or in communities or chatrooms in the internet. Furthermore the life of other people in media can refer to problemes in your own life. Now I come to the negative things, at first it has a bad effect like violence to kids, like Talkshows. There are often falsehoods or only the half truths and unrealistic constructions, like „Super Nanny“. Moreover it can to involve to social descent and consequently to an addiction. An other negative thing is an actually probleme in the news, like the misuse from datas by persons, who are registered in online meshworks or communities. Herewith I want to finish my dissertation, I hope it does animate to meditation.