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gast · Gast

kann jemand korregieren bitte sehr wichtig

In my dreams I will be your hero
Today I am with you together
You alone with whom I become a really hero
When I rescue you, you smile in the answer
And you say me quietly in an ear, that what you says will be our secret
Let us get to know closer
You with me will be a shining star
No reason has to become shy
I give you my magic forces and you will learn to fly
Make none provides but enjoy

I wish to tell, to you, you likes to me
I wish to observe of you
I wish to be your hero and what is it with me
If I save you that precisely I know
Only you one with me now

Come with me I am your hero
With you I become absolutely another
I today yours saviour
We feel ourselves well together
To me approach more close
Be with me do not leave

Here and there I rescue you
There here again I cover from a rain
You with me in my sure hands
I am with you as if I am a comics hero

I m your saviour , I m your hero heroman
You are my hero , I m your hero hero fan

tippi · Gast

Hmmm, wenn ich das jetzt berichtige, sind aber leider die Reime dahin...