Letter of recommendation - Korrekturlesen

patsko · Anmeldungsdatum: 01.06.2005 Beiträge: 7 Wohnort: Bei Hamburg

Hey ho, ich habe einen Letter of Recommendation für eine Bewerbung in den USA verfasst. Allem voran suche ich jemanden, der die folgenden Ausschnitte einmal korrekturliest. Ebenso bin ich aber auch für inhaltliche und vor allem auch Hinweise zur Wortwahl bzw. Strukur dankbar! Vielen Dank und viele Grüße Patsko

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To whom it may concern

This letter serves as my full support of xxx. He asked me for a recommendation letter due to his application for ... at University of ...

Mr. xxx did work for our agency [...]. During this time he has run through all assignments of a company of that kind from concept creation...

As a member of a project team xxx brought in exceptional valueable ideas during concept creation for miscellaneous customers from the steel industry. Also he created a concept for our new customer relationship management system, in addition he proved his abilities while restructuring our media archive and maintaining our website.

I am pleased to say that xxx is a team player and that he was a huge enrichment for our team. He appears with outstanding qualities which are absolutely essential for a prospective executive. Especially during busy periods of realization of projects he convinced us through balance and structured thinking. For that we asked him to work for us again at a subsequent date.

My conclusion is that xxx is a suitable candidate for your [...]. I am pretty sure he will hone his distinctive qualities during this time and will work strongly focussed for obtaining his graduation. So i higly recommend xxx for your program and hope that you will offer him this unique chance for his life.

Yours sincerely