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BLD
Anmeldungsdatum: 14.05.2008
Beiträge: 3
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 Verfasst am: 02. Jun 2008 11:53 Titel: Bitte um Hilfe |
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Ich wollte gern um Hilfe bitten, der andere Beitrag ist von meiner Schwester, undich bräuchte hilfe bei meinem eigenem Text.
Dear.
I'm sorry, I couldn't write earlier because I had no time.
It was interesting to hear about school life in Britain.
I studied for the English test all evening probably will be very difficult.
I don't like school very much.
My favorite subject is math, I can do best, the other, I can not so well and they may not.
Now I have to finish this letter.
I'm looking forward to getting your letter.
Bye
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My favourite sport is football.
In this sport is the goal the ball into the opponent's goal to shoot.
Is giving a many rules for this sport for a fair game.
The gate is always a goalkeeper of the balls starts.
Whit a rule violation there is a penalty.
There are two teams with eleven people on the field.
The Referees of the field monitored the game.
A gamelasts 90 minutes.
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So, das war der text, kann leider nicht den gleichen Text wie meine Schwester nehmen da es sonst eine 6 wird. |
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Goldenhind
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Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006
Beiträge: 399
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| Verfasst am: 03. Jun 2008 19:09 Titel: Re: Bitte um Hilfe |
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Dear.
I'm sorry, I couldn't write earlier because I had no time.
It was interesting to hear about school life in Britain.
I studied for the English test all evening. Probably it will be very difficult.
I don't like school very much.
My favorite subject is math, (which) I can do best. The other (subjects), I am not so good in and they may not. den letzten Teil des Satzes verstehe ich nicht.
Now I have to finish this letter.
I'm looking forward to getting your letter.
Bye
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My favourite sport is football.
In this sport it is the goal (wohl besser "aim") to shoot the ball into the opponent's goal.
There are many rules for this sport for (oder "in order to have") a fair game.
The gate is always a goalkeeper of the balls starts. Der Satz ist mir völlig unverständlich
Whit bin mir nicht sicher, ob with hier das richtige Wort ist. Vielleicht besser "in consequence of" a rule violation there is a penalty.
There are two teams with eleven people (each) on the field.
The Referees of the field monitor the game.
A gamelasts 90 minutes.
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Vor allem der zweite Text weist wirklich erhebliche Mängel auf. Ihr solltet insbesondere darauf achten, nicht einfach Wort für Wort aus dem Deutschen zu übersetzen, weil dann der Satzbau automatisch falsch wird. |
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