Indirekte Rede

immi · Anmeldungsdatum: 03.12.2007 Beiträge: 10

Hi
ich habe ein Proble, und zwar bin ich in der Indirekten rede nicht sonderlich gut und bei unserer letzten Hausaufgabe bin ich mal wieder nicht drangekommen. Könntet ihr vielleicht mal nachsehen ob ich einigermaßen richtig liege?
wir hatten ein paar Stichwörter und sollten einen Text in der Indirekten rede schreiben. das ist mein resultat:

Ben told his friend about his last schollyear:" After the examen we went for a barbecue on the playground of our school. It was exciting because it was the last barbecue we had together.
The following day we had a party with Hauke. We had loud music and girls there, too, but the neighbours came and said we had to made the music not so loud. we did it, but it wasn't as much fun as before.
a week after we had made a biketrip to Timmeler Meer. We wanted to stay there for a night. So we made our tents ready. it has been verry hot and so we swam with the nice people there and had much fun. the following day we went home.
But the best was our trip to London! We floe from Hamburgs airport to London and stood there for 10 days. We had seen much sights, but nothing was better than Madame Tussaud's! I've never had seen so real but unreal people. It was realy fantastic!"

Goldenhind · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006 Beiträge: 399

Der Text den du geschrieben hast ist leider vollständig in der direkten Rede verfasst.

Vergleiche:

direkte Rede:
Ben told his friend:"After the examen we went for a barbecue"

indirekte Rede:
Ben told his friend that they had gone for a barbecue.

Ausführliche Erklärungen zur indirekten Rede findest du hier:
http://www.ego4u.de/de/cram-up/grammar/reported-speech

immi · Anmeldungsdatum: 03.12.2007 Beiträge: 10

Oh, danke. naja dann setz ich mich nochma ran. Die seite ist echt klasse vielen dank!!! Thumbs up!

Ganz liebe Grüße immi