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Sleepy Hollow
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 Verfasst am: 01. Jun 2005 17:38 Titel: Summary Korrigieren |
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Hallo,
ich habe einen Summary von 2 Kapiteln eines Buches geschrieben, und würde euch bitten mir den Text zu korrigieren. Falls es jmd. interessiert, das Buch heißt: gossip girl - nobody does it better
Summary
Blair and Nate are together again. The only thing which disturbs Blair's luck is that it's still unclear whether she will be accepted at Yale or not. While Blair and Nate lying in Nate's bed, talking, Nate's friends came over to visite him. Because Blair feels totally uncomfortable with Nate's frieds, she goes home. Serena invites Jenny to her appartment, but soon she wishes she haven't.
So, das wars, vielen Dank schonmal! |
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Ulli
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| Verfasst am: 01. Jun 2005 17:56 Titel: summary |
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@ Sleepy Hollow 
Hier mein Korrekturvorschlag:
Blair and Nate are together again. The only thing which disturbs Blair's luck is that it's still unclear whether she will be accepted at Yale or not. While Blair and Nate are lying in Nate's bed (hier kein Komma) talking, Nate's friends come over to visit him. Because Blair feels totally uncomfortable with Nate's friends, she goes home. Serena invites Jenny to her apartment, but soon she feels sorry (bereuen) that she has done it.
Am besten, du vergleichst deinen Text mit dem korrigierten  .
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Tomorrow is often the busiest day of the week.
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Sleepy Hollow
Gast
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| Verfasst am: 01. Jun 2005 18:09 Titel: |
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ah, danke schön!
"are" und "friends" sind übrigens nur tippfehler. Auf meinem Block hatte ich das richtig geschrieben!
LG |
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Ulli
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| Verfasst am: 01. Jun 2005 18:22 Titel: text |
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.....kann doch mal passieren 
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LG Ulli
Tomorrow is often the busiest day of the week.
Spanish proverb |
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