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 Verfasst am: 19. Nov 2011 11:20 Titel: Passive |
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Meine Frage:
Meine Frage:
David, an account executive at CooperWeston, wrote these notes on 20th January about the recent Starlight campaign. Write them as a formal report, using the passive. Use past, present and future forms as necessary.
Meine Ideen:
Meine Ideen:
2. 1st December: Creative team presented basic concept.
2. We were presented a basic concept on 1 st December.
3. 8th December: Starlight chose us to do campaign.
3. We were chosen to do the camaign on 8th December.
4. Some days: Boss asked me to manage the account.
4. I was asked to manage the account in some days.
5. Since then: Have kept client Meine Ideen:
2. 1st December: Creative team presented basic concept.
2. We were presented a basic concept on 1 st December.
3. 8th December: Starlight chose us to do campaign.
3. We were chosen to do the camaign on 8th December.
4. Some days: Boss asked me to manage the account.
4. I was asked to manage the account in some days.
Selber Fehler wie in 3: Im Passivsatz wird das OBJEKT (me) zum SUBJEKT (I) und muss natürlich dann auch im Satzbau mit dem ehemaligen Subjekt den Platz tauschen!
5. Since then: Have kept client up to date with progess through daily contact.
5. ? have kept client --> The client has been kept up to date with progess through daily contact.
6. 10th January : Finalized TV, magazine and poster campaign dates.
6. TV , magazine and poster campaign dates were finalized on 10th January.
7. Last few days: Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April.
7. TV commericial slots have booked Media planned dept fpr early April.
8.Today: Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign.
8. For TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign have just have just agreed final script.
9. This week: Planning people are booking magazine space for early April to early May.
9. We were booked space for early April to early May planning people in this week..
10. 2nd-5th Feburuary: Make Film commercial in Mexico, and show it on Tv for first time- 1st April.
10. ?
Stimmt das ?
contact.
5. ? have kept client --> The client has been kept. Den Rest bekommst du dann selbst hin.
6. 10th January : Finalized TV, magazine and poster campaign dates.
6. TV , magazine and poster campaign dates were finalized on 10th January.
7. Last few days: Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April.
7. Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April in last few days. Nein, das ist kein Passiv. Du tauschst nicht Subjekt und Objekt, sondern schreibst nur den Satz aus. TV comercial slots sind das Objekt, was zum Subjekt werden muss und das Media Planning dept. ist das Subjekt, was jetzt nur noch Objekt sein soll.
8.Today: Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign.
8. Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign today. Wie 7 |
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| Verfasst am: 20. Nov 2011 19:44 Titel: Re: Passive |
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Demnächst benutze bitte den "Antworten"-Button und erstelle keine neuen Themen, da ich diese leider nicht zusammenführen kann. Ferner bitte ich dich, deinen Thread zu ordnen, sonst wird sich keiner mehr die Mühe machen, zu schauen, was du denn jetzt eigentlich möchtest. Du hast manche Sachen doppelt und dreifach, manchmal sind meine Kommentare noch drin, etc.
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| Zitat: | 4. Some days: Boss asked me to manage the account.
4. I was asked to manage the account for some days. Wahrscheinlich soll das eher heißen, dass der Account für einige Tage übernommen wird.
7. Last few days: Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April.
7. TV commericial slots have been booked by the Media planning dept for early April. Sonst fehlt die Form von "to be". Ferner ist das Media planning dept. ein feststehender Ausdruckt.
8.Today: Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign.
8. The script for TV commercial and the artwork for magazine campaign has just been agreed (up)on. Zugegeben, der Satz ist schwierig, das obige ist meine Version. Der Punkt ist folgender: Was ist das Subjekt des alten Satzes? Steht nicht da, soll aber "we" sein. Und außerdem können nur "wir" über etwas entscheiden. Das Hauptproblem hier ist, dass "to agree on" meiner Meinung nach eine Präposition haben sollte (sich auf etwas einigen), was dieses Satzende braucht.
9. This week: Planning people are booking magazine space for early April to early May.
9. Magazine space is being booked for early April to early May planning people in this week..
Auch hier: was ist das direkte Objekt, was jetzt Subjekt wird? Damit anfangen! Dann überlegen, welche Zeit im Satz steht und diese Zeit einfach exakt ins Passiv bringen. Das führt zwar hier zu einer etwas seltsam anmutenden Konstruktion, so ist das aber bei Verlaufsformen im Passiv.
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