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Gast Ute
Anmeldungsdatum: 18.11.2011
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 Verfasst am: 18. Nov 2011 18:32 Titel: Passive |
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Meine Frage:
David, an account executive at CooperWeston, wrote these notes on 20th January about the recent Starlight campaign. Write them as a formal report, using the passive. Use past, present and future forms as necessary.
Meine Ideen:
1. Early November: Starlight asked us to make a presentation.
1. We were asked to make a presentation in early November.
2. 1st December: Creative team presented basic concept.
2. We were presented basic concept on 1 st December.
3. 8th December: Starlight chose us to do campaign.
3. Are chosen us to camaign on 8th December.
4. Some days: Boss asked me to manage the account.
4. He was asked me to manage the account in some days.
5. Since then: Have kept client up to date with progess through daily contact.
5. ?
6. 10th January : Finalized TV, magazine and poster campaign dates.
6.Finalized TV , magazine and poster campaign dates on 10th January.
7. Last few days: Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April.
7. Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April in last few days.
8.Today: Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign.
8. Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign today.
Stimmt das ?
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| Verfasst am: 19. Nov 2011 10:05 Titel: Re: Passive |
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| Gast Ute hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Meine Frage:
David, an account executive at CooperWeston, wrote these notes on 20th January about the recent Starlight campaign. Write them as a formal report, using the passive. Use past, present and future forms as necessary.
Meine Ideen:
2. 1st December: Creative team presented basic concept.
2. We were presented a basic concept on 1 st December.
3. 8th December: Starlight chose us to do campaign.
3. We were chosen to do the camaign on 8th December.
4. Some days: Boss asked me to manage the account.
4. I was asked to manage the account in some days.
Selber Fehler wie in 3: Im Passivsatz wird das OBJEKT (me) zum SUBJEKT (I) und muss natürlich dann auch im Satzbau mit dem ehemaligen Subjekt den Platz tauschen!
5. Since then: Have kept client up to date with progess through daily contact.
5. ? have kept client --> The client has been kept. Den Rest bekommst du dann selbst hin.
6. 10th January : Finalized TV, magazine and poster campaign dates.
6. TV , magazine and poster campaign dates were finalized on 10th January.
7. Last few days: Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April.
7. Media Planning Dept have booked TV commericial slots for early April in last few days. Nein, das ist kein Passiv. Du tauschst nicht Subjekt und Objekt, sondern schreibst nur den Satz aus. TV comercial slots sind das Objekt, was zum Subjekt werden muss und das Media Planning dept. ist das Subjekt, was jetzt nur noch Objekt sein soll.
8.Today: Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign.
8. Have just agreed final script for TV commercial and artwork for magazine campaign today. Wie 7
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Die einfachsten Beispiele sind dir gelungen. Bei komplizierteren Beispielen wiederholst du nur in einem vollständigen Satz, was da steht. Sieh dir dein erstes Beispiel an:
Starlight asked us
We were asked.
Siehst du, wie da diagonal Objekt und Subjekt vertauscht werden?
Vielleicht kannst du den Rest dann korrigieren?
Gruß
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