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Heute noch bitte es ist wichtig!ich muss das morgen abgeben!
danke!
Australia
Australia is the of the five continents and it's the biggest island of the world. Is surrounded by the Indian Ocean in the west and the Pacific Ocean in the east. The distance from east to west is 4.000 km s and from north to south is about 3.200km s. The country is extremely big and there live only 19 million people. Most of them live in the big cities like: Melbourne, Brisbane, in the biggest city Sydney with 4 million inhabitants and in the capital Canberra. The continent consists of six colonies: 1.Western Australia 2.Northern Territory 3.South 4.Queensland 5.New South Wales 6.Victoria and the island Tasmania. Most of the country is desert but in the east is also rainforest. That explain that the cities were built nearly the cost. There are four climate zones –tropics –subtropics –dry season and continental climate. Important mountains are: the Blue Mountains, the Olgas and the Ayers Rock it's a holy place for the Aborigines. The gold rush had a big influence on the population in. On the 1.1.1901 became a member of the Commonwealth. That means the community of states which belonged to the British Empire . Today is independent from the but the Queen is still the head of the continent. Australia has got lots of interesting and special animals, like, the wombats, the koalas, the wallabies, the Tasmanian Devils, the kangaroos with there very small babies. They were only 1,5cms high and live in the pouch of her mother. The dingoes are very dangerous for sheep. A big income for the Australian people is tourism, there are lots of advertisement about the beautiful country side and the special towns like Sydney. There are lots of sights: -the Sydney Opera House. It was specially designed, looks like an open shell and was built by the Danish architect, Joern Utzon. –Another attraction is the Sydney Harbour Bridge it is called as the "Hanger". - A nature attraction is the Great Barrier Reef. It's the largest deposit of corals in the world. - It gives only one important river: the Murray river. |
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| Verfasst am: 07. Mai 2009 00:31 Titel: Re: hallo, könnt ihr mir das korrigieren bitte wichtig |
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So, ich habe mal drüber geschaut - ist aber schon spät, daher kein Anspruch auf Vollständigkeit (hoffentlich stimmt wenigstens alles  ). Rot=Fehler, Orange=jedenfalls so unschön, wahrscheinlich sogar fehlerhaft, grün=Vorschlag.
Insgesamt ist der Text aber leider recht zusammenhangslos. Das ist schade.
Gruß
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Australia
Australia is one of the five continents and it's the biggest island of the world Sachfehler: Entweder Insel oder Kontinent. It is surrounded by the Indian Ocean in the west and the Pacific Ocean in the east. The distance from east to west is 4.000 km s and from north to south is about 3.200km s. The country is extremely big and there live only 19 million people. Most of them live in the big cities like Melbourne, Brisbane, the biggest city Sydney with 4 million inhabitants and in the capital Canberra. The continent consists of six colonies: 1.Western Australia 2.Northern Territory 3.South 4.Queensland 5.New South Wales 6.Victoria and the island Tasmania. Most of the country is covered by deserts but in the east there is also a rainforest. That explain that the cities were built near to the cost. There are four climate zones –tropics –subtropics –dry season and continental climate. Important mountains are: the Blue Mountains, the Olgas and the Ayers Rock, which is a holy place for the Aborigines. The gold rush had a big influence on the population in. On the 1.1.1901 Australia became a member of the Commonwealth. That is the community of states which belonged to the British Empire . Today it is independent from the Britain but the Queen is still the head of the state. Australia has got lots of interesting and special animals, like the wombats, the koalas, the wallabies, the Tasmanian Devils, the kangaroos with there very small babies. In their early childhood, they are only 1,5cm tall and live in the pouch of her mother. The dingos are very dangerous for sheep. A big income for the Australian people is tourism, there is lots of advertisement for the beautiful country side and the special towns like Sydney. There are lots of sights: -the Sydney Opera House. It was specially designed, looks like an open shell and was built by the Danish architect, Joern Utzon. –Another attraction is the Sydney Harbour Bridge it is called as the "Hanger". - A nature attraction is the Great Barrier Reef. It's the largest deposit of corals in the world. - There is only one important river: the Murray river. |
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