Korrekturlesen:Elizabethan world picture

Kantige Bergeule · Anmeldungsdatum: 16.03.2007 Beiträge: 26 Wohnort: Siegen

The elizabethan age was the age of the renaissance, but the elizabethans were much closer to a medieval way of thinkig than to our modern picture.
The renaissance was reborned.The Elizabethan time period was the beginning of a new generation of living. It was when people started to say well I can't I lead a fun and interesting life why must I wait for the after life? It was this time period that a lot of the great art work and entertainment came out into the open. It was also this time that William Shakespeare brought his talent into the world. This was also the time of King Henry the eighth, and Queen Elizabeth.
Renaisance was a unpressed time and it was also a movement against the church. It was a movement of freeing oneself. The elizabethan time was a liberal time. You were open-minded. The Queen support Shakespeares plays and like culture events, and that what the Queen like,like the others.
Everybody like Shakespeare´s play,because everybody understand the language that he uses,another important aspect is that the plays are dealing with the main problems of human being, like love,death and jelausy.

Vielen Dank fürs Korrekturlesen im vorraus.

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Hi, hier mein Vorschlag:
The Elizabethan Age was the time of the renaissance, but the Elizabethans were much closer to a medieval way of thinkig than to our modern picture.
The renaissance was reborn.The Elizabethan time period was the beginning of a new generation of living. It was when people started to say "Why I can't I lead a funny and interesting life, why must I wait for the life after?" It was this time period when a lot of the great art work and entertainment came out into the public. It was also this time when William Shakespeare brought his talent into the world. This was also the time of King Henry the eighth, and Queen Elizabeth.
Renaisance was a unpressed time and it was !!! Wiederholung!!! also a movement against the church. It was Wiederholung a movement of freeing oneself. The Elizabethan time was a liberal time. You were open-minded. The Queen supported Shakespeare's plays and like culture events, and that what the Queen like,like the others. ??????????????Everybody liked Shakespeare´s play,because everybody understood the language that he used,another important aspect is that the plays were !!! dealing with the main problems of human being, like love,death and jealousy.

Sorry, der Text ist schlecht. Du solltest auf Wiederholungen achten, Genitive, unregelmäßige Verben , Großschreibung und auf die Zeiten.

Goldenhind · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006 Beiträge: 399

Pass bloß mit wörtlichen Übersetzungen von stehenden Begriffen auf. Du willst sicherlich "Weltbild" sagen, das heißt aber nicht "world picture" sondenr "world view", sowas musst du im Zweifelsfrei immer kurz nachschlagen, dafür sollte die Zeit nochr reichen.

Jacks · Anmeldungsdatum: 19.02.2008 Beiträge: 10

Ist zwar ziemlich alt der Thread, dennoch bin ich gerade auf ihn gestoßen auf der Suche nach dem Weltbild zur Zeit Elizabeths. Und der bekannteste Titel zum dem Thema ist das Buch von E. M. W. Tillyard: The Elizabethan World Picture. Hätte ich zwar auch nicht so gesagt, aber ...

Wolllle · Gast

Die Korrektur von dem Admin hier finde ich ehrlichgesagt auch richtig schlecht..

Wolllle · Gast

Wollte noch nicht abschicken

"The Queen supported Shakespeare's plays and like culture events, and that what the Queen like,like the others. "

Wird zu

"The Queen supported Shakespeare's playes and LIKED culture events, so she made them accessible to the other people."

Keine Ahnung mir fällt grad auch keine schönere Formulierung ein, aber der Text oben ist pures Denglisch..

Jack · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 09.04.2006 Beiträge: 549

"culture events" ist aber immer noch Denglisch, es heißt wenn dann "cultural events".

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