Korrekturlesen Equiry Geschäftsbrief

mai1990 · Anmeldungsdatum: 12.07.2014 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
Hallo liebe Englischfreunde,

leider ist mein Englisch nicht das beste, deshalb möchte ich Euch gern bitten mal über folgenden Geschäftsbrief (Enquiry - amerikanische Version) zu schauen und mich auf eventuelle Fehler oder Verbesserungen aufmerksam zu machen.
Ich danke Euch!

Liebe Grüße

Office Exquisite
Europastraße 15 ? D-64783 Frankfurt ? Germany
Tel. +49(0)453-9019-5 ? Fax +49(0)453-901951
www.office-exquisite.de ? [email protected]

July 11, 2014

Office Universe Inc
348 Riverwalk
Pewaukee, WI 53072
USA

Inquiry for a cooperation as a business partner

Dear Sir or Madam

A few days ago we have discovered the address of your company on the internet.

We are a leading manufacturer of exquisite office furniture based in Frankfurt, Germany. In addition we have a branch in Munich. Our company has been successfully for five years throughout Europe and we are currently planning a market launch in the U.S. for the next year. Therefore we are looking for ambitious business partners for selling our products.

To give you a first impression we have attached you a current catalog of our high-quality office furniture.

We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully

Susanne Friedrich
Secretary

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siehe Brief