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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 16. Dez 2006 10:22 Titel: (World)News |
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Hi!
Ich muss in Englisch einen Kurzaufsatz schreiben und evtl dann darüber was erzählen (so referatähnlich)
Das Thema hierzu sind aktuelle Nachrichten, kann weltweit sein.
Nun hab ich allerdings ein Problem: Welches Thema soll ich denn nehmen? Die meisten aktuellen Sachen wurden leider schon besprochen :-(
also wenn jemand für mich einen Themenvorschlag hat, bitte schreiben!!!
Danke schonmal!!! |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 17. Dez 2006 14:11 Titel: |
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hey!
hab mir jetzt mal des thema mit der baker kommission rausgesucht.
wenn ich meinen text hier reinstell, kann den evtl jemand korrigieren? und sonst evtl noch verbesserungsvorschläge bringen? |
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Goldenhind Ehrenmoderator
Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006 Beiträge: 399
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Verfasst am: 17. Dez 2006 16:01 Titel: |
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Korrigieren würde ich ihn dir bestimmt |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 17. Dez 2006 17:13 Titel: |
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ok, wär cool!!!
allerdings bin ich noch net ganz fertig (muss mich selbst noch weng ins thema einlesen und so)...ich denk mal morgen werd ichs schaffen |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 17. Dez 2006 17:32 Titel: |
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also nen teil hab ich jetzt schonmal.
was jetzt noch fehlt sind die ergebnisse des berichts und evtl. meinungen dazu.
wäre echt nett, wenn dus dir mal anschauen kannst. ich weiß nicht obs so hundert pro verständlich und richtig ist, aber hab mich echt bemüht (ach ja, teilweise isses etwas stichpunktartig, is ja fürs referat).
Today I want to tell you something about the new results of the newest report of the “Baker Commission“ from the 6th of Dezember 2006.
First of all a few general information to the Baker Commission:
- official name of the Baker(-Hamilton-) Commission: Iraq Study Group (ISG); it is composed of a group with 10 persons
- was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation of the situation in the Iraq and the US-led Iraq War and making policy recommendations for future strategies and actions
- members:
o led by co-chairs James Baker, a former Secretary of State (and a Republican), and
o Lee Hamiltion, a former U.S. Representative (and a Democrat)
o Furthermore there are 8 another specialists from the 2 parties; (in each case equal number):
o In additon to Baker, the panel´s Republican members were:
Sandra Day O'Connor, former Supreme Court Justice
Lawrence Eagleburger, former Secretary of State
Edwin Meese III, former US Attorney General
Alan K. Simpson, former U.S. Senator from Wyoming
o In additon to Hamilton, the panel´s Democratic members were:
Vernon Jordan, Jr., business executive
Leon E. Panetta, former White House Chief of Staff
William J. Perry, , former US Secretary of Defense
Charles S. Robb, Governor and U.S. Senator from Virginia
- activities:
o Domestic:
The ISG met members of the U.S. national security team, along with President Bush, on November 13.[4] Before this announcement it was reported that Baker was in regular contact with the White House, especially with National Security Advisor Stephen Hadley and President Bush.[5]
o International:
On 11 November 2006, it was announced that UK Prime Minister Tony Blair, who has supported President Bush in the Iraq war, was to give evidence to the ISG. A Downing Street spokesman said that Blair would give his submissions via video link on 14 November. It was believed at the time that the UK Prime Minister would outline his ideas on Iraq in a major foreign policy speech on Monday, 13 November
Was ist denn jetzt als Ergebnis für den Bericht noch wichtig zu erwähnen?
Ich tu mich nämlich etwas schwer, dazu noch etwas zu schreiben |
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Goldenhind Ehrenmoderator
Anmeldungsdatum: 17.08.2006 Beiträge: 399
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 11:16 Titel: |
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smart5000 hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Today I want to tell you something about the new results of the (besser)latest report of the “Baker Commission“ from the 6th of December 2006.
First of all a few general information about the Baker Commission:
- official name of the Baker(-Hamilton-) Commission: Iraq Study Group (ISG); it is composed of a group with 10 persons Das gefällt mir so nicht, schreib doch einfach: "It has got ten members"
- was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation Der Begriff appreciation gefällt mir hier gar nicht, was willst du denn sagen? of the situation in the Iraq and the US-led Iraq War and making policy recommendations for future strategies and actions
- members:
o led by co-chairs James Baker, a former Secretary of State (and a Republican), and
o Lee Hamiltion, a former U.S. Representative (and a Democrat)
o Furthermore there are 8 other specialists from the 2 parties; (in each case equal number):
o In additon to Baker, the panel´s Republican members were:
Sandra Day O'Connor, former Supreme Court Justice
Lawrence Eagleburger, former Secretary of State
Edwin Meese III, former US Attorney General
Alan K. Simpson, former U.S. Senator from Wyoming
o In additon to Hamilton, the panel´s Democratic members were:
Vernon Jordan, Jr., business executive
Leon E. Panetta, former White House Chief of Staff
William J. Perry, , former US Secretary of Defense
Charles S. Robb, Governor and U.S. Senator from Virginia
- activities:
o Domestic:
The ISG met members of the U.S. national security team, along with President Bush, on November 13.[4] Before this announcement it was reported that Baker was in regular contact with the White House, especially with National Security Advisor Stephen Hadley and President Bush.[5]
o International:
On 11 November 2006 Bei den Datumsangaben solltest du schon eine gewisse Konsequenz bei dem gewählten System durchhalten, it was announced that UK Prime Minister Tony Blair, who has supported President Bush in the Iraq war, was to give evidence Verstehe ich nicht. Beweise worüber denn? to the ISG. A Downing Street spokesman said that Blair would give his submissions via video link on 14 November. It was believed at the time that the UK Prime Minister would outline his ideas on Iraq in a major foreign policy speech on Monday, 13 November
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 12:55 Titel: |
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hi, danke erstmal!
mach dann später noch weiter.
frage noch: wie würdest du denn die ergebnisse des berichtes schreiben bzw. zusammenfassen?
was ich mit
was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation
aussagen wollte:
Die Baker-Kommission, eigentlich Iraq Study Groupist eine zehnköpfige Gruppe, die am 15. März 2006 vom amerikanischen Kongress eingesetzt wurde, um eine unabhängige Beurteilung der Situation im Irak und Empfehlungen für künftige Strategien und Aktionen zu erarbeiten
[das allgemeine is mehr oder weniger von wikipedia, weils da am besten zusammengefasst war] |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 14:47 Titel: |
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also ich habs jetzt mal so weit:
Commission“ from the 6th of December 2006.
First of all a few general information about the Baker Commission:
- official name of the Baker(-Hamilton-) Commission: Iraq Study Group (ISG); it is composed of a group with 10 persons; it has got 10 members
- was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation of the situation in the Iraq and the US-led Iraq War and making policy recommendations for future strategies and actions
- members:
o led by co-chairs James Baker, a former Secretary of State (and a Republican), and
o Lee Hamiltion, a former U.S. Representative (and a Democrat)
o Furthermore there are 8 other specialists from the 2 parties; (in each case equal number):
o In additon to Baker, the panel´s Republican members were:
Sandra Day O'Connor, former Supreme Court Justice
Lawrence Eagleburger, former Secretary of State
Edwin Meese III, former US Attorney General
Alan K. Simpson, former U.S. Senator from Wyoming
o In additon to Hamilton, the panel´s Democratic members were:
Vernon Jordan, Jr., business executive
Leon E. Panetta, former White House Chief of Staff
William J. Perry, , former US Secretary of Defense
Charles S. Robb, Governor and U.S. Senator from Virginia
- activities:
o Domestic:
The ISG met members of the U.S. national security team, along with President Bush, on November 13. Before this announcement it was reported that Baker was in regular contact with the White House, especially with National Security Advisor Stephen Hadley and President Bush.
o International:
On 11 November 2006, it was announced that UK Prime Minister Tony Blair, who has supported President Bush in the Iraq war, was to give evidence to the ISG. A Downing Street spokesman said that Blair would give his submissions via video link on 14 November. It was believed at the time that the UK Prime Minister would outline his ideas on Iraq in a major foreign policy speech on Monday, 13 November
- results:
o Iraq Study Group Report: published: 6th of Dezember 2006
o It was drawn up after nearly four years of war and the deaths of more than 2,900 American troops and at least 150,000 Iraqis.
o the panel made 79 recommendations for the US Government to follow.
o final report of the ISG: recommendations apply to Bush and the U.S. Congress; possibility: to change the policy in the Iraq;
but: report is not committing
o Report stated, that US policy was not working and the ability of the United States to decide events was diminishing. Violence was "increasing in scope, complexity and lethality" and there was no "magic solution" or guarantee of success, said the 142-page report. The section with which the White House will have most difficulties is that regarding the need for a regional diplomatic initiative.
o Requests a fundamental radical chance of policy by Bush
Suggestions/results:
so, hier komm ich jetzt nicht weiter, ich weiß echt nicht mehr was ich da jetzt alles schreiben soll |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 14:52 Titel: |
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zu den ergbnissen hab ich jetzt mal folgende seiten und stichpunkte:
http://www.heute.de/ZDFheute/inhalt/6/0,3672,4087590,00.html
http://www.heute.de/ZDFheute/inhalt/24/0,3672,4086776,00.html
An "Iraq International Support Group" should be established made up of all countries bordering Iraq and the key regional states and the five permanent members of the UN Security Council plus Germany, Japan and South Korea. (welche Staaten/Länder sind denn das hier dann letztendlich?)
As if that were not enough for a White House that has been tepid at best about multi-lateral diplomacy, the group then recommends that the US should "actively engage Iran and Syria in its diplomatic dialogue, without preconditions".
The group says America's military mission should be changed from one of combat to training Iraqi forces. It recommended up to 20,000 US troops being "embedded" with Iraqi soldiers, a sharp rise from the 4,000 currently serving with Iraqi units, and envisaged American combat troops leaving Iraq within 16 months. Democrats were swift to describe the report as a vindication of their opposition to the war and said they would help Mr Bush to end it.
The group said its 79 recommendations should be adopted as a whole and were not a shopping list from which the president could choose the most palatable options.
Mr Bush has commissioned other studies of Iraq policy and has repeatedly sought to portray the Iraq Study Group, established by Congress, as presenting merely one of several sets of options.
Its assessment is relentlessly negative. "Current US policy is not working," it states. Most Americans are "soured on the war", the cost of which is "not sustainable". US forces are stretched "nearly to the breaking point". |
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Goldenhind Ehrenmoderator
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 16:00 Titel: |
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smart5000 hat Folgendes geschrieben: | was ich mit
was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation
aussagen wollte:
Die Baker-Kommission, eigentlich Iraq Study Groupist eine zehnköpfige Gruppe, die am 15. März 2006 vom amerikanischen Kongress eingesetzt wurde, um eine unabhängige Beurteilung der Situation im Irak und Empfehlungen für künftige Strategien und Aktionen zu erarbeiten |
Meines Wissens ist der Begriff "appreciation" eher positiv wertend im Sinne von Anerkennung. Für Beurteilung würde ich "assessment" benutzen.
"Government" wird in Amerika meistens eher allgemein im Sinne aller staatlichen Institutionen benutzt. Wenn man von der Regierung spricht, benutzt man "administration".
Bei den letzten Stichpunkten merkt man sehr schnell, dass du sie abgeschrieben hast, weil sie in typischer Journalistensprache geschrieben sind |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 16:08 Titel: |
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ja, also die letzten stichpunkte warn nur beispiele für den report (werde die auch net nehmen)...kannst du mir da evtl noch weng weiterhelfen was ich da noch alles reinschreiben muss? |
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 16:13 Titel: |
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soweit hab ichs jetzt mal (passt des so?/isses verständlich als referat oder soll ich noch was ändern?)
Today I want to tell you something about the new results of the latest report of the “Baker Commission“ from the 6th of December 2006.
First of all a few general information about the Baker Commission:
- official name of the Baker(-Hamilton-) Commission: Iraq Study Group (ISG); it is composed of a group with 10 persons; it has got 10 members
- was appointed the first time on the 15th of March 2006 by the United State Congress in order to acquire/work out an independent appreciation of the situation in the Iraq and the US-led Iraq War and making policy recommendations for future strategies and actions oder ist vielleicht das hier besser: independent body set up by Congress to assess the situation in Iraq and recommend a way forward
- members:
o led by co-chairs James Baker, a former Secretary of State (and a Republican), and
o Lee Hamiltion, a former U.S. Representative (and a Democrat)
o Furthermore there are 8 other specialists from the 2 parties; (in each case equal number):
o In additon to Baker, the panel´s Republican members were:
Sandra Day O'Connor, former Supreme Court Justice
Lawrence Eagleburger, former Secretary of State
Edwin Meese III, former US Attorney General
Alan K. Simpson, former U.S. Senator from Wyoming
o In additon to Hamilton, the panel´s Democratic members were:
Vernon Jordan, Jr., business executive
Leon E. Panetta, former White House Chief of Staff
William J. Perry, , former US Secretary of Defense
Charles S. Robb, Governor and U.S. Senator from Virginia
- activities:
o Domestic:
The ISG met members of the U.S. national security team, along with President Bush, on November 13. Before this announcement it was reported that Baker was in regular contact with the White House, especially with National Security Advisor Stephen Hadley and President Bush.
o International:
On 11 November 2006, it was announced that UK Prime Minister Tony Blair, who has supported President Bush in the Iraq war, was to give evidence to the ISG. A Downing Street spokesman said that Blair would give his submissions via video link on 14 November. It was believed at the time that the UK Prime Minister would outline his ideas on Iraq in a major foreign policy speech on Monday, 13 November
- results:
o Iraq Study Group Report: published: 6th of Dezember 2006
o It was drawn up after nearly four years of war and the deaths of more than 2,900 American troops and at least 150,000 Iraqis.
o the panel made 79 recommendations for the US Government to follow.
o final report of the ISG: recommendations apply to Bush and the U.S. Congress; possibility: to change the policy in the Iraq;
but: report is not committing
o Requests a fundamental radical chance of policy by Bush
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smart5000
Anmeldungsdatum: 25.09.2006 Beiträge: 27
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Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2006 17:02 Titel: |
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weiß denn keiner mehr weiter?
es ist echt wichtig...und ich hab mich auch wirklich bemüht, komm aber selber nimmer weiter |
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