brauche kontrolle bei summary zu einem buchkapitel

Gast

hi,
ich hab ne kleine summary zu einem kapitel in einem buch geschrieben.
kann jemand vielleicht diese mal lesen und auf wortfehler und Stil prüfen?

The novel “Ash Wednesday” by Ethan Hawke is about the relationship between Christy Ann Walker and Jimmy Heartsock. Chapter 9 is divided into six parts. The third part is called “Father Matthew”. He works for the Saint Patrick’s Holy Trinity Church of Cincinnati and confirmed Jimmy when he was a little boy. He also buried his father. So Jimmy and Christy want that the Father marries them in a catholic church. When Jimmy enters in the church offices the Father couldn’t remember of Jimmy at first. But then he remembers. After they have talked a while the Father decides to marry them. But before he will do this he wants that Jimmy confesses. Jimmy confesses that he had taken drugs, slept with prostitutes and one under aged girl. Then they talk about Jimmy’s father. The priest says that he did not have it easy in the past, because his dad committed suicide. Then Jimmy begins to cry and thinks that he wants to begin a new chapter in his life. He says that he can’t understand why all the people must talk negatively about his dad. He loves his father and he was a great person for him.
At the End of the chapter the Father gets to know Christy. She tells him the story how they got to know each other and how much she loves him. For her Jimmy is a very emotional person, who can listen to and understand her.
Then Christy and Jimmy leave with an Episcopal book of common prayer, because they should study the various services and work on one suited specifically for them.
Next day they should call the Father again, who checks on the chapel availability for next Friday.

danke im voraus marc

Gast

Wie sollt ihr denn die Summary schreiben? So wie du sie gemacht hast, darf ich sie nämlich gar nicht machen.

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Gast

das wichtigste wär erstmal, wenn mich jemand auf rechtschriebfehler aufmerksam macht, denn wie ich die summary schreiben soll da hab ich ne vorgabe(z.B. 1 einleitungssatz, keine zitate, wortbegrenzung...), das klappt. Ich stelle diese frage hier im forum, weil ich das selbst zur übung gemacht habe für meine nächste englishc klausur und es sonst keiner kontrollieren wird auf grammatikalische fehler/stil.
wär nett, wenn mir jemand helfen würde.