my son the fanatic

Gurke · Anmeldungsdatum: 16.12.2012 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
Hallo kann jemand bitte folgenden Text korrigieren?

Meine Ideen:
The story "My son the fanatic" by Hanif Kureishi published in 1994 is about Parvez, a father concerned about his son Ali. Parvez recognizes that his son Ali became tidier, disloged his belongings and not meets his friends any longer.
Unable to talk with Ali about his change, Parvez tells his friends, which work such as himself as taxi drivers. They think Ali takes drugs and instruct Parvez to watch Ali carefully.
Having watched his son, Parvez meets Bettina, a prostitute he likes.Being relieved, Parvez tells her about his friends suggestion about Ali. She tells him clues that show drug abuse, however Parvez didn't notice any of this signs.
At home Parvez hears to his relief his son praying, knowing his son's change.
Parvez inform Bettina and his friends.
At the next day Parvez meets Bettina and tells her about the last evening:
Parvez forced his son to go out with him to a restaurant.
In the restaurant Parvez was taught by his son about what's wrong and right, because Parvez drinks alcohol and eats portk, what's forbidden in the Koran.
And Ali told his father that he gives up study as accounter and work in prison with other Muslims.
Bettina persuades Parvez not to give up on Ali.
Therefore Parvez endures his son's reproaches and try to explain him his philosophie of life. However Ali condemn his father for being not religious.
A few evenings later Parvez drives Bettina in his taxi and they put Ali from the street. Being asked about some general questions Ali insults Bettina whereupon Bettina runs away.
Arriving at home Parvez hits Ali, who asks: "So sho's the fanatic now?"

anonym · Gast

Hey,

... is about Parvez, a father who is concerned....
Parvez recognizes that his son Ali has become tidier, has dislodged his belonging and does not meet his friends any more.
... his friends who work like himself as taxi drivers about it.
.. however Parvez hasn't noticed any of them.
...knowing the reason of Ali's change, he informs Bettina and his friends.
The next day.. the last evening when he has forced his son to..
..
Also, Ali has told his father that he will give up his studies as an accounter in order to work in prison...
Therefore, ... and tries to explain... However, Ali condemns...
.. and they pick up Ali from the street.
...whereupon Bettina throws herself out of the driving car.
Arriving at home Parvez gets drunk and then hits his son who calmly asks: ...