motivation letter/ cover letter...

noRA · Gast

Hallo!

Kann mir vllt jemand mal tipps und verbesserungsvorschläge zu meinen cover letter für ne bewerbung geben. Vokabular, Grammatik und Inhaltliche verbesserungsvorschläge erwünscht!

Dear Sir or Madame,

With great enthusiasm I read about your offer as an Intern at Tourism Australia. My status as a third-year student in International Communication Management at the Hague University, combined with my exchange semester at the Simon Fraser University in Vancouver, make me the ideal candidate, for the internship position in the trade and marketing division, in February 2013.

The two universities provided me with different angles on the communication subject. Whereas the Hague University of Applied Science, is putting more emphasis on presentations, project and campaign development for real companies, the Simon Fraser University was a little more in-depth and theoretical. The constant group work in the process of developing campaigns, made me an experienced and good team player.

I am a big traveller myself and fell in love with this great, red country in my gap year between High School and University. Your marketing campaigns are witty and convinced me immediately.
As I am very interested in destination branding, or as Jeremy Hildreth, a guest lecturer named it: nation branding, I would be grateful to be part of your team and promote the Australian brand.

Thank you for your time and consideration. Please contact me regarding any queries you may have. I am available for an interview at any time.

Sincerely,