Korrektur - Summary of Mark (After the first Death)

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das ist mein summary of Ben. (9.Klasse, Gym.)
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Mark Marchaid is a important person in the drama "After the first death" of the writer/author Robert Cormier.
He is the father of Benjamin Marchid and works as a general, who doesn't want to be called a general (p. 9 l. 3)
Benjamin says that his father is "sensitive", "prosessional" and "patriot", because he want to fight and win for his homeland in a war.
Nevertheless Mark behaves strangely towards Ben, because he never speaks about his labour.
The meeting with Ben after the strange event is "unpleasant for him, although he is otherwise very "strength" as a general must be.
Before he worked as a general, he was a professor for "psychological stuff and behaviour invention" at "New England University, sp he has always "been too shadowy to pin down" and used Mark used this experience to educate Ben in everyday life