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 Verfasst am: 27. März 2010 23:11 Titel: Bewerbung korrekturlesen |
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Hi erstmal!
Ich hab ne Bewerbung geschrieben, bin damit aber nit 100% zufrieden. Könnte da jemand mal drüber gucken? Das ganze geht nach China und es ist ein deutsches unternehmen.
Vielen dank schonmal für die Mühe!
Grüße!
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Application for an internship in the field of HR Training and Development/Recruitment
Dear Ms xxxxx,
I am applying for the internship posted at the website of the “AHK” in Shanghai, China. Please find my resume attached along with the other necessary documents to support my application.
I am very interested in the xxxxx Group due to its image as a modern and progressive company. During my studies, the xxxxx Group has been named on several occasions, in particular as a supplier for the automotive industry. The role of suppliers is fundamental for every company. And since this role is getting even more important, due to the recent shift to system suppliers and supply networks, I decided to study this in more depth.
I am also very interested in this position due to my great passion for China, particularly taking the present and future economic importance into consideration. I have acquired basic knowledge of the Chinese culture and language thanks to a language course offered by my university (see attachment six). Additionally I am using the upcoming semester in order to further my English and Chinese with respective courses.
Currently I am studying business administration in my fourth semester and would like to take this opportunity to do an internship with your firm. What attracts me in particular to this position is the combination of the renowned name of the xxxxx Group, the country and the possibility to put my skills and qualities into practice and to improve them. In addition, the field of Human Resource occupies an essential position for every department in a corporation. For this reason one of my areas of specialization during my studies is Staffing Policy. Therefore I believe this will greatly benefit my future studies and career prospects.
As far as my course of study is concerned, I have chosen the following winter semester for my internship abroad. I am therefore available to start the internship from October 2010. Our compulsory internship is laid-out for 820h (circa 20.5 weeks), but I would like to prolong it to six months.
Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
xxxx xxxx
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