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einstein
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 Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 16:31 Titel: Application letter |
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Hallo,
I would like to write an application letter!
First of all, I need a introducation. After the introducation I need a main part. And at the end, perhaps two or 3 sentences where I collect the main statement!
It is so correkt, or it's too little?
Maybe, you know some formulation helps, please write these down! |
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tippi
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| Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 22:03 Titel: Re: Application letter |
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I suppose you want us to correct your writing.
Here we go.
| einstein hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Hallo,
I would like to write an application letter!
First of all, I need an introducation. without "a"
After the introducation same thing I need a main part.
And at the end, perhaps two or 3 three why not writing it down? sentences where in which I collect the main statement!
It is so Is that/it correkt correct, or it's too little? sounds funny, but i've no idea if it's wrong - "is it not enough?" will suit it
Maybe, you know some formulation helps there are some correction to make , please write these down! |
You don't have to put a "!" at the end of each sentence. That makes every statement an order (and appears rude). |
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einstein
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| Verfasst am: 28. Jun 2009 12:40 Titel: |
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Thanks for your help! |
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