personal description über Michael Jackson..

1mAtRiX9 · Anmeldungsdatum: 09.01.2010 Beiträge: 1

Hallo members,
Ich Habe über die Weihnachtsferien personal description über Michael Jackson aufbekommen. Und da ich normal nicht sehr stark in Englisch bin halt in der Gramantike bzw. Rechschreibung ob mir den text vllt jemand korrigieren könnte oda vllt noch irgend was dazu schreibe, weil ich muss 5 min vortragen..

Hello my name is ………………. and I’m 15 years old. I live in ………………. with my mom and dad and my Sister.
Dates:
Today I will tell you something about Michael Jackson and his family. Nearly everybody knows the name Michael Jackson, but do you know some backgrounds, for example his family and career?
So I begin my presentation with the dates of Michael Jackson. Michael Jackson´s full name is Michael Joseph Jackson and his nicknames were King of Pop an Jacko Wacko He was born on the 29th of August 1958 in Gary, Indiana. Gary is a town with 99.000 inhabitant and the town is northwest the USA. He was grow up to a big family with nine children, five brother and three sisters, and everyone in the family was musical.
Career:
At the age four he and his brothers, Marlon, Tito, Jackie and Jermaine formed Jackson 5 and the group quickly rose to worldwide fame.
Michael Jackson began his musical career at the age of 5 as the singer of The Jackson 5 and released his first solo recording. In 1968 the Jackson 5 signed a contract with Motown records and only a year later they achieved their first number one US single with the song I want you back. In 1971 Michael Jackson released his first solo single. It wasn’t until 1979, that he released his first solo album and in 1980 he won his first Grammy Award
He began a then a full-fledged solo career in 1979 an formally with his brothers und sisters in 1984. And the Album Thriller was the biggest selling album of all time was released by Michael Jackson. He also performed the moonwalk for the first time on TV.
Private life:
Now I will tell you something about the private life of Michael Jackson and his look. He have 3 kids: Paris (), Prince Michael(). And Prince Michael Jackson II.
Michael Jackson was the most famous and richest Singer of the USA and he had a fortune of 1 billions Dollar. In my Opinion I think Michael Jackson was the most famous and richest Singer of the World. From 1988 to 2005 Michael Jackson lived on his Neverland Ranch prooerty, on which he built an amusement park and private zoo for children.
And now tell you something about his style. He had black hair and his eye colour was brown. He was 1,78 tall, but he often change is Style.
J chose this topic, because I’m not real big fan of Michael Jackson, but I think Michael Jackson is the King of pop. This was my presentation, I hope it was interesting.

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nein ich finde das passt so. smile