text about the isolated Britons.

daniel2006 · Anmeldungsdatum: 23.01.2006 Beiträge: 12

Hallo ich habe hier ein Text geschreiben und wäre froh wenn jemand den text verbessern könnte.

DIe Frage dazu war: What facts does the reader learn about the attitude of the British towards Europe ?
The attitude of the British towards Europe not very positive. Britons live in their own world, they speak only their own language and don’t accept the European Union. The reader also gets informed about the cultural diffrences and the dissociation from Europe. Furthermore Britons like to travel in Europe but only with like-minded people (from their own island ). When they bask in the sun they want to have real british beer to feel like beeing in Britain. Maybe their strong isolation was affected by the country’s parliament. It’s not only the parliament in Britain wich makes them confident, there are also the colonies which makes them a bit overconfident or rather a bit bigheaded. To compare the opionions of younger and elder people, you have to consider the second world war from wich the elderly people are minted. That has to do with the stereotypes Britons have about Germans and French. Younger people are more open-minded towards the idea of an united Europe including Great Britain. They feel better informed and especially involved in the Nation. The channel tunnel is not only a route of transport it’s also a link to Europe. But one thing you have to accept, it’s their food.

Ich hab einfach die Argumente nocheinmal aufgefasst vom Ursprungstext natürlich in anderen Worten.

Gruß

daniel2006

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

@daniel2006: hier mein Korrekturvorschlag

The attitude of the British towards the Europeans not very positive. Britons live in their own world, they only speak their own language and do not accept the European Union. The reader also gets informed about the cultural diffrences and the dissociation from Europe. Furthermore Britons like to travel in Europe but only with like-minded people (from their own island ). When they bask in the sun they want to have real British beer to feel like being in Britain. Maybe their strong isolation was affected by the country’s parliament. It’s not only the parliament in Britain which makes them confident. There are also the colonies which make them a bit overconfident or rather a bit big-headed. To compare the opionions of younger and elder people, you have to consider the Second World War by which the elderly people are still minded. That has to do with the stereotypes Britons have about Germans and the French. Younger people are more open-minded towards the idea of a united Europe including Great Britain. They feel better informed and especially involved in the nation. The Channel Tunnel is not only a route for transport , it’s also a link to Europe. But one thing you have to accept is their food.

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