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Taylor · Gast

HI wir sollen ein Gespräch erstellen hoffe ihr könnt dieses mal auf die Grammatik korrigieren.

After the mutual greeting the reporter, the socialworker and the priest asks the old woman serveral questions.
Reporter: What are the reasons that you must life on street?
Old woman: I had a cruel past. With 19 years i have lft my parants home, because there exists many conflicts. So I lived on street and had few money and no job. On street i meet other people which have no home too. We lives by snitching and sleep together under bridges and trainsstations.
Social worker: What happen next?
Old woman: I get a baby by one of the street guy^s. But after the birth dies it.
Social worker: Thats terrile. How stand you that?
Old woman: my life doesn^t change. Today i life under the subsistence level too. My only purpose in life is to feed the burds in the park.
Social worker: You treat them like your own child which you never had?
old woman: Yes i think there are my childs.
Priest: Thank you for tellings us your bad past. I will hope god helps you to lead a better life in the future.

Angel · Gast

After the mutual greeting the reporter, the socialworker and the priest ask the old woman serveral questions.
Reporter: What are the reasons that you must life on street?
Old woman: I had a cruel past. With 19 years i have left my parents house because there have been many conflicts. So I have to live on the street and had got a few money and no job. On street I meet other people without home. We lived by snitching and sleeped together under bridges and trainsstations.
Social worker: What happened next?
Old woman: I got a baby by one of the street guys. But after the birth it died.
Social worker: That`s terrible. How stand you that?
Old woman: my life doesn^t change. Today I also live under the subsistence level My only purpose in life is to feed the burds in the park.
Social worker: You treat them like your own child which you never had?
old woman: Yes I think there are my childs.
Priest: Thank you for telling us your bad past. I will hope god helps you to lead a better life in the future.

So in etwa, kann aber auch sein, dass ich da ein paar fehler übersehen habe!! smile

Taylor · Gast

ok alles klar danke

kabafit · Gast

hallo,

wahrscheinlich kommt meine korrektur zu spät...naja, schaus dir an:

After the mutual greeting the reporter, the social worker and the priest ask the old woman serveral questions.
Reporter: What are the reasons that you have to live in the street?
Old woman: I had a cruel past. At the age of 19 I have left my parants house because there existed many conflicts. So I have been living in the street with a few money and no job. In the street I have met other people which have no home too. We live by snitching and sleep together under bridges and in train stations.
Social worker: What happened next?
Old woman: I had a baby by one of the street guys. But after the birth it died.
Social worker: Thats terrible. How could you stand that?
Old woman: my life doesn't change. Today i live under the subsistence level too. My only purpose in life is to feed the birds in the park.
Social worker: You treat them like your own child which you never had?
Old woman: Yes, I think they are my children.
Priest: Thank you for telling us your bad past. I hope god will help you to live a better life in the future.

gruß
sabine