Can anybody correct my text, please?

Maxe · Anmeldungsdatum: 06.09.2005 Beiträge: 19

Hi,

kann mir jemand den text bitte korrigieren. Es it kein problem, wenn es nicht zu 100% stimmt.
Wenn ihr fehler seht, kreidet sie bitte einfach an.

Jamila: " I don´t know what to do. I´m thinking all the time but I can´t find a solution. My father makes me very furious and I hate him because of his actions. He destroys my and my mothers life. I can´t accept that I should marry the man he had chosen. All the time he want´s to prevail against me. What should I do?"
Karim: " It´s a difficult situation. Your father is very stubborm, he doen´t see his mistakes. I think it wouldn´t make sense if we talk to him again, it only would bring more disaster. I haven´t ever been in such a situation but I will support you where I can. How would it be if you go away from home?"
Jamila:" And what´s with my mother? If my father get fit again he would hit her again. No way, I must protect her! Maybe it would be the best if he dies. That sounds hard, I know."
Karim:" Your father makes you a big pressure. Maye he would eat again if you do what he orders. But thats no solution and your right: It´s unforgivable what he is doing with your mother! She needs support and protection, but not from you, it´s not your task!"
Jamila:" On the one hand I feel responsible for my mother but on the other hand i hate her, because she doesn´t resist him."
Karim:" In my opinion it would be the best it you and your mother go away."
Jamila:" But she won´t to do this, because she loves Anwar. I can´t understand her! She never would go to the Council and tell what her husband do with her."
Karim:" She needn´t to do this. It´s better for you two if you leave this city and this country to live in freedom and without reminds."
Jamila:" But where?"
Karim:" My grandma lives in France. It´s far away, i know, but it can be a new beginning for you. She would be happy if you live by her, because she´s old and her husband died recently."
Jamila:" And my father?"
Karim:" He said that he will die and if he doesn´t die my family will have a look after him. Maybe he get an access and then we can see further. But now it´s the best solution for all of you!"
Jamila:" Your right! I have learned french at school for 3 years, so it won´t be such a problem with the language.We can´t live any longer with him. I will convince my mother and tomorrow we will go! I´m very thankful! You´re the best!
Karim:" No thing. If you will have any problems I will help you!"

lg M.

chibimalik · Anmeldungsdatum: 15.05.2005 Beiträge: 91 Wohnort: USA

Jamila: " I don´t know what to do. I´m thinking all the time but I can´t find a solution. My father makes me very furious and I hate him because of his actions. He destroys my and my mother's life. I can´t accept that I should marry the man he had chosen. All the time he wants to prevail against me. What should I do?"
Karim: " It´s a difficult situation. Your father is very stubborm, he doesn´t see his mistakes. I think it wouldn´t make sense if we talk to him again, it would only bring more disaster. I have never been in such a situation but I will support you where I can. How about going away from home?"
Jamila:" And what about my mother? If my father recovers he will hit her again. No way, I must protect her! Maybe it would be the best if he dies. That sounds hard, I know."
Karim:" Your father is putting you under pressure. Maybe he would eat again if you do what he orders. But that's no solution and you're right: It´s unforgivable what he is doing with your mother! She needs support and protection, but not from you, it´s not your task!"
Jamila:" On the one hand I feel responsible for my mother but on the other hand I hate her, because she doesn´t resist him."
Karim:" In my opinion it would be the best if you and your mother went away."
Jamila:" But she won´t to do this, because she loves Anwar. I can´t understand her! She would never go to the Council and tell what her husband does to her."
Karim:" She needn´t do this. It´s better for you two if you leave this city and this country to live in freedom and without reminds."
Jamila:" But where?"
Karim:" My grandma lives in France. It´s far away, I know, but it can be a new beginning for you. She would be happy if you live with her, because she´s old and her husband died recently."
Jamila:" And my father?"
Karim:" He said that he will die and if he doesn´t die my family will have a look after him. Maybe he get an access and then we can see further. But now it´s the best solution for all of you!"
Jamila:" You're right! I have been learning French at school for 3 years, so it won´t be such a problem with the language.We can´t live any longer with him. I will convince my mother and tomorrow we will go! I´m very thankful! You´re the best!
Karim:" No problem. If you have any problems I will help you!"

Maxe · Anmeldungsdatum: 06.09.2005 Beiträge: 19

boa....super Tanzen

vielen vielen dank! Wink

chibimalik · Anmeldungsdatum: 15.05.2005 Beiträge: 91 Wohnort: USA

you're welcome smile