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Help · Gast

Hi

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für die Schule soll ich eine Beschreibung der Nachbarschaft und was ich daran mag und nicht mag erstellen. Ich habe mich jetzt versucht... Englisch ist leider nicht so meins...
Kann mir jemand sagen ob die Grammatik und Rechtschreibung so ok sind?

My city is a small town in the XXX of Berlin. My apartment is in a multi-family house in which ten families live.
The house has three floors and in the first floor there are a laundry and a flower shop.
Behind my flat are single-family houses and a large forest. There is also a lake in the middle of the forest.
In the front of my home are many large blocks of flats. Around the corner in the end of my street is a nursery and in the other direction are a petrol station and a supermarket.
Near my house there is also a primary school and a secondary school. Two hundred meters away from my apartment, there is a main road that runs through the city. From there drive also many buses. A train station is at the other end of town.
I live in a quiet residential neighborhood with mainly German inhabitants.

What I really like about my neighborhood is the quiet and lots of nature. That you can go shopping without a car is also nice.

What I do not like are the few possibilities for free time activities and the few parking. I also do not like is that the cinema was closed.

sonja96 · Gast

The place where I live is a small town in the near of Berlin. My apartment is in a multi-family house in which ten families live.
The house has three floors and on the first floor there are a laundry and a flower shop.
Behind my flat there are single-family houses and a large forest. There is also a lake in the middle of the forest.
In the front of my home there many large blocks of flats. Around the corner at the end of my street there is a nursery and in the other direction there are a petrol station and a supermarket.
In the near of my house there is also a primary school and a secondary school. Two hundred meters away from my apartment there is a main road that runs through the town . Many buses leave from there. A train station is at the other end of the town.
I live in a quiet residential neighborhood with mainly German inhabitants.

What I really like about my neighborhood is the calm and nature around it. Being able to go shopping without a car is also nice.

What I do not like are the few possibilities for free time activities and the few parking places. What I don´t also like is that the cinema is closed.[/quote]

Adelem · Anmeldungsdatum: 28.04.2013 Beiträge: 8

Hallo,

also rein vom Ausdruck her kann ich dir auf jeden Fall folgen und weiß auch genau, was du damit sagen möchtest. Allerdings haben sich leider ein paar kleinere Fehler in Sachen Grammatik und Rechtschreibung verirrt.