Korrektur:Englisch Referat Dubai Burj al Arab

maggo · Anmeldungsdatum: 24.01.2011 Beiträge: 1

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Burj Al Arab

My topic today is the wonderful luxury hotel Burj Al Arab in Dubai.
Now at first I will tell you something about the emirate Dubai and about the city Dubai.
Dubai is one of the seven emirates of the Arabian Peninsula at Persian Gulf.
The city Dubai lies on the northern edge of the emirate Dubai. But it´s divided by the Dubai creek in two districts, namely bur Dubai and deira.
85% of the habitants the emirate Dubai live in the city Dubai, because the city is very impor-tant by reason of economy, politicy and sociality.
Now I will tell you something about the town landmark by Dubai.
Burj Al Arab is one of the most luxurious and most expensive hotels in the world.
Construction of this great hotel began in 1994 and ended in 1999. The design of the tower is in the form of a sail by the 28th Stick to the land side mounted heliport (210 meters) and the added height of 200 meters to the lakeside prominent restaurant. The hotel is located on an artificial island. The original plan was to build the hotel directly on the coast and not on an artificial island, but that plan was rejected because the building would have cast too much shade on the beach.
The architect of this building is Tom Wright. Tom Wright said "The client wanted a building that would become an iconic or symbolic statement for Dubai; this is very similar to Sydney with its Opera House, or Paris with the Eiffel Tower. It needed to be a building that would become synonymous with the name of the country.”
All the hotel rating systems have 5 stars maximum, but Burj Al Arab was rated by customers as a 7 star hotel.
Burj Al Arab has altogether 202 rooms there suits with a square meter between 169 and 780.
The wonderful hotel has 60 levels, 18 elevators and 8 restaurants.
For this hotel was used 8000 beaten gold.
The building cost is 1, 5 Mrd. US $. Prices per night start at 1900€.
Now in the end I will tell you something about my pictures.
Do you want to see the pictures?
The pictures were very difficult to paint. That was a joke.
In this picture we can see the entrance of Burj Al Arab. The stairs goes to the rooms (picture 1)
And in this picture we can see the living room.(picture 2)
In this picture we can see the levels (picture 3)
That´s Burj Al Arab in the evening (picture 4)
Here we see the restaurant in Burj Al Arab with a big aquarium and big fishes. (Picture 5)
In this picture we see a lower floor. The lower floor has a living room with a dinning table for four and a bar, a guest bathroom and a dressing room. The stairs goes to the upper floor, where a king size bed stands, and a luxurious bathroom with Jacuzzi is located.
And in the last picture we can see the great beautiful hotel Burj Al Arab in Dubai
I think that the hotel is very charming, but too expensive.
I hope you enjoyed my presentation.
And many thanks for listening.
If you have any questions, you can ask me.

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Dominik · Anmeldungsdatum: 21.02.2011 Beiträge: 9

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Burj Al Arab

My topic today is the wonderful luxury hotel Burj Al Arab in Dubai.
Now at first I will tell you something about the emirate Dubai and about the city Dubai.
Dubai is one of the seven emirates of the Arabian Peninsula at Persian Gulf.
The city Dubai lies on the northern edge of the emirate Dubai. But it´s divided by the Dubai creek in two districts, namely bur Dubai and deira.
85% of the habitants the emirate Dubai live in the city Dubai, because the city is very impor-tant by reason of economy, politicy and sociality.
Now I will tell you something about the town landmark by Dubai.
Burj Al Arab is one of the most luxurious and most expensive hotels in the world.
Construction of this great hotel began in 1994 and ended in 1999. The design of the tower is in the form of a sail by the 28th Stick to the land side mounted heliport (210 meters) and the added height of 200 meters to the lakeside prominent restaurant. The hotel is located on an artificial island. The original plan was to build the hotel directly on the coast and not on an artificial island, but that plan was rejected because the building would have cast too much shade on the beach.
The architect of this building is Tom Wright. Tom Wright said "The client wanted a building that would become an iconic or symbolic statement for Dubai; this is very similar to Sydney with its Opera House, or Paris with the Eiffel Tower. It needed to be a building that would become synonymous with the name of the country.”
All the hotel rating systems have 5 stars maximum, but Burj Al Arab was rated by customers as a 7 star hotel.
Burj Al Arab has altogether 202 rooms there suits with a square meter between 169 and 780.
The wonderful hotel has 60 levels, 18 elevators and 8 restaurants.
For this hotel was used 8000 beaten gold.
The building cost is 1, 5 Mrd. US $. Prices per night start at 1900€.
Now in the end I will tell you something about my pictures.
Do you want to see the pictures?
The pictures were very difficult to paint. That was a joke.
In this picture we can see the entrance of Burj Al Arab. The stairs goes to the rooms (picture 1)
And in this picture we can see the living room.(picture 2)
In this picture we can see the levels (picture 3)
That´s Burj Al Arab in the evening (picture 4)
Here we see the restaurant in Burj Al Arab with a big aquarium and big fishes. (Picture 5)
In this picture we see a lower floor. The lower floor has a living room with a dinning table for four and a bar, a guest bathroom and a dressing room. The stairs goes to the upper floor, where a king size bed stands, and a luxurious bathroom with Jacuzzi is located.
And in the last picture we can see the great beautiful hotel Burj Al Arab in Dubai
I think that the hotel is very charming, but too expensive.
I hope you enjoyed my presentation.
And many thanks for listening.
If you have any questions, you can ask me.
Den Schluss würde ich anders formulieren:
If you have any questions, please ask me.
If there are no more questions I´ll thank you
for your attention.