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ella · Anmeldungsdatum: 28.02.2007 Beiträge: 6

ich muss ne bild beschrieben schreiben un es wär ganz hilfreich wenn den mal jem. nachgucken könnte!!:

In the picture I see two empty chairs. The picture is black and white and without any colour. In the background is one man who has a chair at his back. He seems to be very happy. There are very big houses with a lot of balkons. I think the atmosphere in the picture is peaceful and not loud and hectig but it´s al litttle bit overhelmed. I think the two chairs are empty because the photograph want to show the lonlyness althogh there are so much houses an they stand all beside the other ones. The photo is different to the painting because the other one is colourful. But I think the two photos want to show the same because in both picture you can see that the people feel alone althougt there are other people or houses. I think the photo is more effective than the painting because in my opinon you could discern earlier what is meen with the picture or painting.I think the photo is without colours because the photograph want that you only watch at the important thinks and not at little things. On the photo there is no one at the chairs but on the painting there are to poeple i think that the poeple know each other but they are alone and at the photo there are so much poeple living in the street but you are alone.

graefchen · Anmeldungsdatum: 11.03.2007 Beiträge: 4

Hey ella,

firstly your text seems to be a little bit "untidy", it would have been better to put aspects dealing with each other in one paragraph, but therefore you have to structure your analysis in paragraphs!

To your grammar: