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Aeronautics Gast
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Verfasst am: 24. März 2006 13:41 Titel: Lebenslauf zusammenfassen |
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Also es geht darum:
Alfred Bernhard is the man behind the Nobel Prizes
He was an engineer.
He Was an inventor and a poet
He was born in Stockholm in 1833
He left Stockholm at the age of nine.
His family moved to Russia
He was educated by private tutors
He studied chemical engineering
He studied languages and literatur
He studied in the United Sates and France
Das ganze zum "fließen" bringen.
Wie fängt man das an und wie bringt man Überleitungen?
In 1833 Alfred Bernhard Nobel is born in Stockholm, when he was nine he left it... |
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Ukkat Gast
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Verfasst am: 24. März 2006 13:55 Titel: |
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seh ich das jetzt richtig, dass du die stichpunkte zu einem richtigen Text machen sollst?!
"In 1833 Alfred Bernhard Nobel is born in Stockholm, when he was nine he left it..."
der anfang ist schon net schlecht,aber es müsste "was born" heißen.
In 1833 A.B.N. was born in Stockholm and he left the city at the age of nine ( or when he was nine years old ).... |
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Aeronautics Gast
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Verfasst am: 24. März 2006 15:26 Titel: |
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Was mir so schwer fällt sind die Zusammenhänge der Studien was er gemacht hat.
Wie kann man da überleiten! |
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Ukkat Gast
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Verfasst am: 26. März 2006 20:45 Titel: |
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First he started to study ..... but later he decided to study .... because he was more interested in it.
He also did not stay at one place all the time and he travelled to different countries to contain and ( vertiefen - mir fällt gerade das wort nicht ein ) his studies and his knowledge about the country and the subject...
so in etwa könnte man das sagen!!! |
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