Kann mir das jemand korregieren?

jennyfer · Anmeldungsdatum: 04.02.2011 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
hi smile

kann mir jemand den text verbessern? da müssten wahrscheinlich ein haufen fehler drin sein. ich habs nicht so mit englisch...
also wär super wenn ihr mir helft!
dankeschön :)

Meine Ideen:
dear diary,
i still can not beleave what happend. thoughts are runnig trough my mind, while at the same time i do not know what to think anyway.
i never felt like this before. it is like iam falling into thousands of tiny peases and there is no chance that anyone will ever be able to fix me up again. playing a role made me loose myselfe. who am i? daddys little well-educaded muslem girl? or the tough and sexy university student who is admired for her body and achievements?
i always taught it is easy to live in two different worlds. changing form my shalwar kameze suit into jeans is a thing of two minutes. being elegant and lovely at home, rocky and wild outside.-that is simple, that is cool. that is what I want. so I can keep my culture without missing to have fun, -to live!
what a brilliant plan?! ? well done, Miriam.
well done, you are the stupidest woman alive! live is not a game. and i should have bin aware of what I put at risk. wasn?t it clear that this would end in a disaster?
i could not decide between wheter i prefere my new or my origen cultur. now i have got to pay the price. i have lost the only thing i were ever sure about! ? farook!

Dennis2010 · Anmeldungsdatum: 11.02.2011 Beiträge: 7

Hallo, jennyfer!

Ich habe im Folgenden versucht, alle reinen Rechtschreibfehler zu verbessern. Ich habe dabei nicht geguckt, wie Dein Ausdruck ist oder ob die Zusammenstellung okay ist, sondern nur die offensichtlichen Rechtschreibfehler beachtet und korrigiert.

Kiwi · Gast

NATÜRLICH........ Zunge