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fabpla
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 Verfasst am: 07. Jan 2011 14:31 Titel: Fiona's trip to London |
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Meine Frage:
Ich muss einen Englischen Text über einen Ausflug nach London schreiben (Ich - Erzählung). Könnte bitte die Fehler (Rechtschreibung, Grammatik, Wortwiederholungen, ...)ausbessern? Danke!!!
Meine Ideen:
Dear Ayla,
London is a nightmare! Since we arrived here last Saturday, everything has gone wrong. But let?s start at the beginning. We had to wait for two hours because our flight was delayed. When we finally arrived in London, it was snowing, which doesn?t happen very often here. It was really hard to get a taxi to the city centre. The hotel was in front of the London Eye. I couldn?t sleep, because there was too much noise. The next day was warmer but there was heavy rain, so we spent all the time in our hotel and played lazy games. IT WAS TERRIBLY!!! On the afternoon we went to a museum which was on the other side off the River Thames. ?OH NO!!!? I thought. In front off the museum was a long queue so the teachers decide to see a film in the cinema. When we arrived we noticed that the tickets were too expensive. So we sat down in a Cafe in Convent Garden. Suddenly I noticed that my money wasn?t here. ?A PICKPOCKET STOLE MY MONEY!!!? I thought. One the tooth day I was so hungry. I didn?t like the English food: FISH AND CHIPS, HAMBURGERS, PIZZA SERVED WITH RICE... TERRIBLY! I was nearly run over by a car because the English people drive on the wrong side. Finally I lost my key for the hotel room and had an argument with my best friend.
NO LONDON ANYMORE!!! |
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fabpla
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| Verfasst am: 08. Jan 2011 14:27 Titel: |
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Hat schon jemand eine Idee?          |
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chocolate4ever
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| Verfasst am: 08. Jan 2011 16:12 Titel: |
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das erste was mir aufgefallen ist: deine ganzen "TERRIBLY" müssen durch "Terrible" ersetzt werden. für mehr hab ich jetzt grad keine zeit aber ich schau heut nacht nochmal drüber wenn ich dran denke.
choco
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fabpla
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| Verfasst am: 08. Jan 2011 16:56 Titel: |
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Warum? |
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fabpla
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| Verfasst am: 09. Jan 2011 17:32 Titel: |
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Warum will mir das keiner erklären??? |
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fabpla
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| Verfasst am: 10. Jan 2011 15:32 Titel: |
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Hallo |
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fabpla
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| Verfasst am: 10. Jan 2011 16:39 Titel: |
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Bitte, ich brauche den Text morgen schon. |
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