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einstein
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 Verfasst am: 22. Jun 2009 21:08 Titel: holiday |
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Hallo,
what were your best last holidays? My best last holidays I have ever made were at Mallorca!
I must say that it's a very beautiful island. You can visit a lot of famous churchs and other sights!
The weather was really good, the sun was shining and I was swimming in the sea!
I like to tell you details about the trip!
In the morning, we were driven to the airport at Dortmund. From there we flown to Mallorca. In the afternoon, I think it was at 17.oo o'clock, when we have been arrived the airport at Mallorca! |
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einstein
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| Verfasst am: 22. Jun 2009 21:13 Titel: |
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The reason why I'm writing this holiday report, is to improve my englisch skills!
I would be pleased if you could correkt my text!
Thanks for your help! |
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MI
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Anmeldungsdatum: 22.01.2005
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Wohnort: München
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| Verfasst am: 23. Jun 2009 23:43 Titel: Re: holiday |
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| einstein hat Folgendes geschrieben: | Hallo,
what were your best last holidays? The best last holidays I have ever had were at Mallorca! Last = letzte, mEn ein sachlicher Widerspruch zu "ever". Bei "I have ever made" würde ich per Bauchgefühl eher ein "had" setzen. Ich kann's aber leider nicht gut begründen, außer, dass man Ferien ja "hat" und nicht "macht". Reisen macht man, Ferien hat man.
I must say that it's a very beautiful island. You can visit a lot of famous churchs and other sights!
The weather was really good, the sun was shining and I was swimming in the sea!
I would like to tell you details about the trip! "Ich würde gerne" klingt besser, man benutzt meistens die Form "I'd like to"
In the morning, we were driven to the airport at Dortmund. From there we flew to Mallorca. In the afternoon, I think it was at 17.oo o'clock, when we arrived at the airport at Mallorca! "have been arriving", wenn schon denn schon. Aber ich würde eher present perfect nehmen, da die Handlung ja damit abgeschlossen ist (in der Vergangenheit). |
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einstein
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| Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 16:23 Titel: |
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Thanks fpr your help!
You see, my english isn't well, but I try to learn better english.
English is very important my the school, or a job. Sometimes it's better to spend more time for learning english than doing unimportant things.
Would you say, that my english is good enough to pass the 11. class?
What can I do to learn english easier than now? |
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geezz
Anmeldungsdatum: 02.06.2009
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Wohnort: near Berlin
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| Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 17:58 Titel: |
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HI!
I'd suggest you start off by reading books in english, watching movies in english or BBC or CNBC to try and understand the english language better.
To the matter with passing the school: that cannot be measured by ones 'english skills', since it's more like how much effort you put in it and if the teacher accepts it or not.
By what I can see, you're not very familiar with writing texts in english, so I recommend you to read some books in english. Trust me when I say that you would improve ALOT in both, writing and speaking english.
And by the way, you can do 'unimportant' things in english, too! =)
//Szte
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I'm from sweden and 16 years old, living near Berlin, I like doing all kinds of sports, but my fav is definetly Aikido and Jiu-Jitsu, in which I will soon have my 1st Dan! (in 1 1/2 years approximately)
Got questions? Ask me! |
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