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BeitragVerfasst am: 29. Dez 2007 12:50    Titel: Rechtschreibkorrektur Antworten mit Zitat

Im ersten Text bin ich ein Reporter, der eine Situation beschrieben soll. (Ein UFO landet) Hammer

I am (mein Name). I reporting to you from L.A. A few minutes ago flew a big round objekt on the earth. At first all throuht it is a meteorite but it is about metall. It has formed a group of people around the object. All wait for the fact that something happens. Now the local police also arrives and does close (absperren) the area...what is it?? A door of the metallic object opens...oh God...what happens here??? A dark figure appeares -no these are several and they attack.

Im zweiten Text geht es um ein Bild, was ich ein wenig erläutern soll.

This picture shows the people about 50 years. One sees flying machines. Probably the next generation of cars. These are no high-rises or streets award. A war has prossibly destroyed a lot. Only the locomotion means point to an advancement. I can recognize the object on the earth badly.
I assume from the fact that these are small houses. The picture looks not very inviting.(einladend) The global warming has possibly provided for the missing trees and plants. The land exist of sand and stones. If that is the future we have a reason to be pessimistic.

Im dritten und letzten Text soll ich sagen warum ich an diesen Ort leben will oder nicht.

I might not have to live there. There people live barely. (Dort leben kaum Menschen.)
Everything exists of stone and sand. I do not know why I would have to live to this place. If that is a confidential place in which my work place is then it is satisfactory. I need more people around myself, so that I feel fine.
This place fulfils none of these criteria.

Es wäre schön, wenn ich es bis zum 5.01.2008 haben könnte.
Ich wünsche euch ein schönen Rutsch ins neue Jahr.
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BeitragVerfasst am: 29. Dez 2007 14:57    Titel: Re: Rechtschreibkorrektur Antworten mit Zitat

MIB hat Folgendes geschrieben:
I am (mein Name). I am reporting to you from L.A. A few minutes agoa big round object flew (SPO!!!) to the earth. At first everyone thought it is a meteorite but it consists of metal. A group of people has formed around the object. All wait for the fact that something happens Der Satz klingt auch komisch.... Now the local police also arrives and does close (absperren) the area...what is it?? A door of the metallic object opens...oh God...what is happening here??? A dark figure appeares -no these are several and they attack.

Im zweiten Text geht es um ein Bild, was ich ein wenig erläutern soll.

This picture shows people (from) about 50 years (in future). One sees flying machines. Probably the next generation of cars. These are no high-rises or streets award. A war has prossibly destroyed a lot. Only the locomotion means point to an advancement. I can recognize the object on the earth badly.
I assume from the fact that these are small houses es wird nicht klar, was du annimmst bzw,. was der "fact" ist. The picture does not look very inviting.(einladend) The global warming has possibly provided for the missing trees and plants. The land consists of sand and stones. If that is the future we have a reason to be pessimistic.

Im dritten und letzten Text soll ich sagen warum ich an diesen Ort leben will oder nicht.

I do not want to have to live there. Only few people live there. (Dort leben kaum Menschen.)
Everything consists of stone and sand. I do not know why I would have to live in this place. If that is a confidential place in which my work place is then it is satisfactory. I need more people around myself, in order to feel fine.
This place fulfils none of these criteria.
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