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deziana
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Hallo ich hab einen englischen Dialog geschrieben.
Ich möchte gern wissen ob, irgendetwas falsch ist.
Falls ihr Verbesserungsvorschläge habt, bitte ich euch sie mir mitzuteilen.
Viel Spaß beim lesen, d.
At living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me money?”
Father: „For what you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I meet my friends today in the city, we want go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?”
Daughter: „Oh daddy, please we have weekend”
Father: „I know, it´s just the thing that I´m worried about you, then you´ve been every weekend at parties and so?”
Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
Father: „I´m not sure!”
Daughter: „Of course, I get this week a good mark in biology”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Thanks daddy, get I money from you now?”
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£ that´s too much?”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidy up my room and I want do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I save my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I couldn’t give you money, before I haven´t talk with mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes at home at evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem.”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends came in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!” |
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Goldenhind
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| Verfasst am: 10. Nov 2007 14:50 Titel: Re: Verbesserungsvorschläge für folgendes: |
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| deziana hat Folgendes geschrieben: | In the living room
Daughter: „Daddy could I bother you for a moment?”
Father: „What´s up?”
Daughter: „Could you give me some money?”
Father: „What for do you need more money? You get enough pocket money”
Daughter: „ Enough? I meet my friends today in the city, we want to go shopping”
Father: „Well, but shouldn’t you stay at home and do something for school?”
Daughter: „Oh daddy, please, it is weekend”
Father: „I know, it´s just the thing that I´m worried about you, then you´ve been at parties every weekend and so?”
Daughter: „I do a lot for school, believe me dad!”
Father: „I´m not sure!”
Daughter: „Of course, I got a good mark in biology this week (Zeitangaben immer an den Satzanfang oder das Satzende, nichts zwischen Prädikat und direktes Objekt stellen!)”
Father: „Great, I´m proud of you!”
Daughter: „Thanks daddy, do I get some money from you now?”
Father: „How much?”
Daughter: „20£!”
Father: „What? You get 15£ in a month, that´s more than enough. ”
Daughter: „Oh, dad!”
Father: „20£ that´s too much?”
Daughter: „Please daddy, I have tidied up my room and I want to (oder besser "will") do my homework tomorrow!”
Father: „That sounds good, but honestly 20£ are too much. Tell me what you have done with your pocket money”
Daughter: „ You know, I save my pocket money, to buy me a new mobile phone”
Father: „ I can’t give you money, before I have talked with mum about it.”
Daughter: „But mum is working, she comes home in the evening.”
Father: „What´s your problem.”
Daughter: „I have no time to wait!”
Father: „I´m sorry, I can´t change it.”
Daughter: „My friends come in 1 hour to pick me up!”
Father: „ You should be equitable 20£ are too much.”
Daughter: „Well….oh granny is there!”
Father: „What did you say?”
Daughter: „I have to go, bye daddy!” |
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deziana
Anmeldungsdatum: 09.11.2007
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lg dezi. |
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