correcting mistakes

nicechica · Gast

Hallo. Unsere Lehrerin hat uns ziemlich viele Sätze gegeben, die allesamt fehlerhaft sind und wir sollen nun die Fehler rausfinden.
Hab ich alle rausgefunden?

1. He is considered as the best man we have.
Me: He is considered to be the best man we have.

2. In general it is equal to me wheather I spend my holidays on the seaside or on the mountains.
Me:In general it [/b]doesn't matter to me wheather I spend my holidays on the seaside or on the mountains:

3. New York is a city of 12 millions.
Me: New York is a city with 12 millions.

4. Our problem is that we do too less grammar.
Me: Our problem is that we do too few[b] grammar.

5. His father didn't go to college and his mother didn't go to.
His father didn't go to college and his mother didn't go as well.

6. On the weekends I am usually working on the garden.
On the weekend (ohne s)
7. I came to Hamburg for 15 years.
I came to Hamburg 15 years ago.

8. The school is in the near of the park.
Konnte ich den Fehler nicht finden.

9. You shouldn't forget that we are out of school for 15 years and are out of practice.
Weiß ich ebenfalls den Fehler net.

10. If you don't like spaghetti, we want that you say so.
If you don't like spaghetti, we want you to say so.

11. When you are not gone in one minute, I will call a police.
If you are not gone / I you don't go

12. He has more money as I. That's why he live so much better.
He has more money as I have.

13. The hats of the gentlemen are black.
gentleman?

14. A friend is someone who is sad when you are sad, and lucky when you are lucky.
Konnte ich den Fehler nicht finden.

15. They realize what for a long trip it will be.
They realize what a long trip it will be.

16. In the next time he'll be promoted.
Kein Fehler?

17. Because these are another we can't judge all three crimes the same way.
Another ist falsch, aber was ist stattdessen richtig?
18. The both people realized that it would be more fun to live together.
...it would be more funny to...

19. I've been waiting for a letter from you since ages.
statt since for ages
20. You haven't finished. Stay working until you get it done.
Keep on working....

21. He's usually getting handkerchiefs for Christmas. He wantd to get something other this year.
statt something anything

22. They gave us good advices.
They gave us well advice.

Ukkat · Gast

in einem der erste Sätze ist auch das "weather" falsch, denn es gibt nicht um das Wetter sondern um das Wort "ob" was im englischen mit whether übersetzt wird.

Ulli · Ehrenmoderator Anmeldungsdatum: 03.07.2004 Beiträge: 1389

Hi, hier mein Korrekturvorschlag smile

1. He is considered as the best man we have.
Me: He is considered to be the best man we have. richtig

2. In general it is equal to me wheather I spend my holidays on the seaside or on the mountains.
Me:In general it [/b]doesn't matter to me wheather I spend my holidays on the seaside or on the mountains: whether

3. New York is a city of 12 millions.
Me: New York is a city with 12 millions.

Of ist richtig, es fehlt das Objekt: inhabitants

4. Our problem is that we do too less grammar.
Me: Our problem is that we do too few grammar.

Vorschlag: do too little grammar

5. His father didn't go to college and his mother didn't go to.
His father didn't go to college and his mother didn't go as well.

Vorschlag: ....his mother didn't go either

6. On the weekends I am usually working on the garden.
On the weekend (ohne s)

Vorschlag: .....in the garden

7. I came to Hamburg for 15 years.
I came to Hamburg 15 years ago. richtig

8. The school is in the near of the park.
Konnte ich den Fehler nicht finden.

Vorschlag: ...is near of the park , ohne in the near

9. You shouldn't forget that we are out of school for 15 years and are out of practice.
Weiß ich ebenfalls den Fehler net.

Vorschlag: .....since 15 years

10. If you don't like spaghetti, we want that you say so.
If you don't like spaghetti, we want you to say so. richtig

11. When you are not gone in one minute, I will call a police.

[b]If you are not gone in one minute, I will call the police.

12. He has more money as I. That's why he live so much better.
He has more money as I have.

Vorschlag:....than I have.

13. The hats of the gentlemen are black.
gentleman?

Vorschlag: The gentlemen's hats are black. -----Genitivform

14. A friend is someone who is sad when you are sad, and lucky when you are lucky.
Konnte ich den Fehler nicht finden.

Vorschlag: .....who is said...(von dem gesagt wird)

15. They realize what for a long trip it will be.
They realize what a long trip it will be. richtig

16. In the next time he'll be promoted.
Kein Fehler?

Vorschlag: ......time he'll be promoted. ohne THE

17. Because these are another we can't judge all three crimes the same way.
Another ist falsch, aber was ist stattdessen richtig? different

18. The both people realized that it would be more fun to live together.
...it would be more funny to...

Vorschlag: Both people.... ohne the

19. I've been waiting for a letter from you since ages.
statt since for ages richtig

20. You haven't finished. Stay working until you get it done.
Keep on working....

Vorschlag: .....finished yet.

21. He's usually getting handkerchiefs for Christmas. He wantd to get something other this year.
statt something anything

.....usually gets.....Simple Present, für Gewohnheiten

22. They gave us good advices.
They gave us well advice.

Vorschlag: They gave us good advice . Kein Plural möglich.

Gast

So, ich bemüh mich auch mal smile

. Habe mir mal die Sätze vorgenommen, bei denen ich meine, sicher genug zu sein.